morriconei wrote:I want it to be on brown, but i thought a second color choice wouldn’t hurt.
In the future, realize that your thumbnail and detail (shirt color) have to match. If we weren't so close to the end of the derby, you'd have gotten rejected for not having the two the same. Had your thumbnail been brown, you put the detail on brown, but you decided to show it on yellow in the blow up on the side, that's been deemed okay and has been done a few times by designers (myself included)
That being said, your brown was a much better choice than the yellow. Your palette would have popped off the brown where it seems to disappear into the yellow.