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Re: Line-O-Elephant

I'm digging it! What would improve it, though, would be to get some smaller folds in the ears to complement the larger ones. GMV anyway. I like the colors too.

Re: Lineage

This is my first entry. Let me know what you think!

JadenKale wrote:the hand holding the spear, for starters... that's the easiest place to see it's not connected to anything. I did a line trace from your larger version in the main thread and saw that while it traced through most of the bottom and over the top, you didn't connect to the detail work in the tabbard, and there's this little spot near the head. So based of those three points, somewhere you either stopped and came back, thinking you had connected it or thought you could fool the eye and did a little fudging. Either way, the linework on the hand holding the spear DEFINITELY gives it away as being multiple lines.

Here, I circled the areas I found.

Yeah you're right, my eye was tricked on those sections. Thanks for pointing out.

Mitohapa wrote:Oh my goodness, fog. Thank you so much for all the votes and kind comments, everyone. I was shocked to get such a response on my second design (which was really meant to be more of a self-indulgent design than anything)! But honestly, I'm very glad you guys like it; thanks again for all your support.

Congrats on the fog! Well deserved. I need to practice more with varying line widths so I can do stuff like this too! GMV Mito.

Re: Here They be Monsters

Nice work, Travis! I'm enjoying this a lot. Hope this keeps up here all week. I had already voted for this once, would do so again!

Re: On the Prowl

While I'll agree that the detail image isn't doing you any favors, the line details here are fantastic. Great job to the both of you.

Re: Owl

Seriously. Put this up at dbh in 60 days! I really want this. I better be able to buy the owl at threadless, too! Wwwwoooooooowwww that's amazing.

Re: yincat-yangcat

You know this is really, really good. I love how it's completely different from a distance. GMV for sure!

Re: Ablaze

this. is gorgeous.

Re: continuous solitude

your a machine. Great job

AnnaJo wrote:Been away for a few derbies, decided to submit something finally. As always, critiques are always appreciated!

So happy to see a music item that is functional. Can't stand the uneducated stuff. Call me a music snob!

Re: Ablaze

yeah this a pretty shirt. very swell

Re: Snake

reminds me of The Little Prince..favorite book by the way..

speedcheetah wrote:can anyone else not see this? i'm confused...

It's supposed to be a lionfish...

Re: On the Prowl

Thats cool that you guys teamed up on this. It seems like a tough derby to colab on

Re: Heartbeat

I really really like this shirt, I just wish the red was a diffrent color, the shirt looks a bit to serious, but besides that the design is awesome, yet simple.

Re: From the Ashes

Still doing well! People like the firebirds. Good luck!

Conrads wrote:Thats a cool shirt...But it kinda goes against my religous beliefs...i wouldn't want people think i believed in evolutionism....But its still a neat concept
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Way to stir up controversy, Shagooz!

Re: Resist

tech

Re: Heron Rising

you definitely have a distinct style..and I don't think I ever would have thought to do that bright blue on brown but it looks REALLY good...

Re: Lit up ( or Burnt Out v.2)

Both versions of this are sweet and look great. I don't see any mistakes! Perhaps some artifacting in the image? GMV.

Re: Burnt Out

aww..poor burnt out bootsboots

Re: Lit up ( or Burnt Out v.2)

ooo..I like this color combo better

Re: Winter Solace

oh this is beautiful..nicely nicely done

Re: ...been hanging around this old town too long.

oh wow...that is crazy cool!

Conrads wrote:Thats a cool shirt...But it kinda goes against my religous beliefs...i wouldn't want people think i believed in evolutionism....But its still a neat concept
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You instead want people to believe you're a mindless fool who doesn't think scientific facts prove anything?

Re: yincat-yangcat

very subtle...this is so wonderfully done I don't even know what to say..except..GREAT job

Re: Zebra

oh bless your soul for putting my favorite animal of all time on a t-shirt and doing it remarkably well

Re: Apollo

really neat concept and wonderfully executed..especially for your first entry

Re: String Quartet

I love the design but I definitely would have gone with a different shirt color..just a personal preference though..wonderfully done

Re: On the Prowl

Dang, this is beautiful, it gets my vote.
I'd probably buy three if it won.

Re: Line-O-Elephant

Its a real stand out image, i'm definitely liking this. You've got my vote!

Good shirt - the "NYC" makes it a little cheesy, but otherwise the design is awesome

Darquis wrote:I'm lmao at this one - it'll never print (and no offense, I probably wouldn't buy it) but it's downright hilarious

I would hope this doesn't print. But I'm glad you like it.

FancyDad wrote:Just block this DB's IP

If you're going to call some one a Dark Helmet, have the grapenuts to call them a Dark Helmet. Sure it gets filtered, but it makes for an interesting read. "DB" is such a cop-out.

Ehh, I'm not really surprised it's not doing well, what with all the mind boggling designs that have cropped up post-alien submission.

Owell. Thanks you guys. I'm gonna keep on submitting, despite my less than stellar reviews. Why? Because I love doing it.

Re: Stick Figures Love Adder

OMGawd I llolled!!!

Re: c for city

This doesn't look like one 1 line

dopey5007 wrote:This doesn't look like one 1 line

nope, but it's wickedly detailed. nice work, doesn't fit the theme.

This is pretty bad ass. Do they correct "ass"? What about Rollerball (2002)? Dark Helmet? koi? I apologize, I know this comment makes no sense by now.

Great design.