Shirt.Woot

TurboGraphx16 wrote:Don't really like it, not my style at all, but it's still got my vote ... because it's ramyb ...

^^: This is my problem with any voting system.. It's like American Idol. The system seems...sort of broken, due to activity like this. -sigh Oh well, it's still fun to participate. However, maybe just submitting directly to Woot is a better option for most of us rather than go up against an internet army in a competition. -walks away broken

Re: Yodel-ay-ee-ooooo

can someone explain this to me?

Re: DEATH NATIONAL PARK

now with 99% less LOTR refrence

Our Movie Genre Our Movie Genre Our Movie Genre! I can't wait for Plinko Park to open!

patrickspens wrote:now with 99% less LOTR refrence

Lol. Nice. Did you really edit it that fast or did you have this one waiting just in case?

Re: A Breath of Fresh Air

i hate this less than usual.

it has some nice colors, but it looks a bit big for lungs and the green on the bottom is bothering me a little.

thats my first impression, ill keep looking at it to see if my opinion changes

Re: Thanks Dad. This is great!

i mite buy this just because of the colors used.

they are all green-ey colors so there isnt anything really offending to the eye.

we will see.

Re: Silly Moose

that moose is cute.

hahaha, dont like it on black tho

billratio wrote:i feel like this fits the theme a little more though. even though that's not why it got rejected. this one has more of the park advertisement feel.

Yep and no direct LOTR references.

Cool!

Re: Carlsbad Caverns - Bat Caves!

HEYYY!!! i asked for red or blue!!!

this is actually a nice shirt.

gettin better there..

Re: Our Newest Park!

Ha! Ha! Blue Moon Parkway, a take off on the Blue Ridge Parkway. But a little higher yet. According to how you look at.

Re: DEATH NATIONAL PARK

And this is exactly why I think Woot needs to do their rejections quickly. Plenty of time for this to be resubmitted.

I actually like it better now

Re: A Breath of Fresh Air

Love it! Nice design! Mountains, beautiful blue sky & the bird is just perfect! I would have no problem wearing it! Hey covered up - not hang'n out, no bad words or suggestions – see that a lot here in Florida. This cool T-shirt design is not a big deal! Men imagining? Well they do that no matter what – anyway.

Re: Thanks Dad. This is great!

What the heck Jewelwing? You are on fire in this derby. Go JW go.

RE: The bottom text: that's a must as far as I'm concerned. It's the punchline of the whole shirt. I'd nix the speech bubble before the bottom text... but it's perfect as-is so yeah.

kender42 wrote:I really like your designs, but this one not so much. Mainly b/c the 'bears' look like ant eaters to me.

they are bears?

Re: A Proper Burial

This is the best design I've ever seen. I'd buy one or fifty.

Re: DEATH NATIONAL PARK

Really impressive drawing. But without the sign that says National Park, how does this have anything to do with parks? I'm wondering if you had this drawing laying around from something else. It doesn't fit the spirit of the derby and that bugs me, even tho it's well done.

Re: A Heavenly Little Hike

funny cuz it's true. this should win.

genericsmith wrote:Yeah... They are pretty new and maybe haven't seen the photo templates before. Lol anyway though.

My first thought when I saw the thumbnail was "How DOES one thoughtfully dispose of polar bear cubs"

Alas no answer, just an anti littering shirt.

those are arctic foxes, or at the very least wolves. but not polar bears.

Re: Hades National Park

boxy corners are boxy.

many ppl dont like that.

i mite be one of them !!!

billratio wrote:they are bears?

I think they're deer, because of the antlers. But I thought they were bears at first too. And then it says bears on it, so I thought it again.

Why does it say bears when they're really deer? Huh, boots? What's going on?

Re: Those dumb kids never listen

hehe the title wins.

mrwednesday wrote:I'm glad to see you finally branching out instead of completely relying on the shiny swirlie crutch you've been using the last several derbies.

It's unfortunate you went with the lung effect. I don't really like it that much as it looks awkward on the shirt. It should be grounds for rejection due to similar shirts existing but you dodged that on listen to your conscience so this will probably fly too.

If you left the tree where it was and sinply expanded the design area to an oval I think it would look much better and also alleviate any chance of rejection.

well i like the lungs, as do a lot of people here. go pick on someone else.

Re: Redundancy National Park

I want to go to this park. Twice.

HalfWheat wrote:It reminds me of The Devil's in the Details, but less ominous. For the record, I'm not saying is similar enough to cause rejection, I'm just saying that's what it reminded me of.

It's pretty, and I like the blue on a brown shirt, but I have to say that the lung placement might be a deal-breaker as far as me wearing it.

where else should lungs be placed? on the back of the shirt like the wings of a fly? back placements don't do well at woot.

someday a front that relates to the back like a punchline would be nice, probably not gonna happen though.

odysseyroc wrote:I wish this was on a brown shirt. Still, I'd buy one if it printed.

It looked funky on brown, with the colors I used... this looked the best I felt. I really love yours, too! I'd buy one.

odysseyroc wrote:Yep and no direct LOTR references.

Heh I worked really hard on cutting those out. Patrick's illustration is beautiful though...

jewelwing wrote:Really impressive drawing. But without the sign that says National Park, how does this have anything to do with parks? I'm wondering if you had this drawing laying around from something else. It doesn't fit the spirit of the derby and that bugs me, even tho it's well done.

i think i agree. especially considering that it was first a design of mordor. i feel like he probably had it done in advance and then just threw the sign on there. i get no national park feel from it.

p.s. the link to your moon didn't work for me

Littletygerkitty wrote:Being of the "fairer sex" I must say that there's not a chance that I would wear this. It's a nice design, and the colors are pleasing, but I'd prefer guys weren't imagining what my lungs look like under that shirt.

Yes, unfortunately I agree. I totally love the shirt however I'm pretty sure most females will not be able to wear this. I wish it were lower on the shirt, I'm not sure if that would solve the problem though without taking away the concept.
Either way, good work! If I were a guy I'd totally buy.

jabberjaws13 wrote:where else should lungs be placed? on the back of the shirt like the wings of a fly? back placements don't do well at woot.

someday a front that relates to the back like a punchline would be nice, probably not gonna happen though.

Gee, defensive much? I didn't say it should be changed, I just said that it might be a deal-breaker for me, personally. Not the whole universe, just my personal anatomy and lifestyle. And I said "might." Maybe I could pull it off, maybe not. Haven't made that decision yet. Something to think about.

HalfWheat wrote:I want to go to this park. Twice.

I want to go to this park. Twice.
I want to go to this park. Twice.

Re: DEATH NATIONAL PARK

Without the LOTR references, now it just looks like a cheap imitation. Had a much better feel before the rejection, it's a shame it couldn't stay.

Re: bear back national park

I would have liked to have seen some greens and browns on the coloring, but it doesn't matter. I'll buy this shirt no matter what.

icymallard wrote:boxy corners are boxy.

many ppl dont like that.

i mite be one of them !!!

it helps give it the poster feel

CrescentDebris wrote:Seconded. Word for word.

I live right next to these, and I have to say this looks amazing.

Re: It's Educational

u know u wanna learn.

Re: Smokin'

http://m.profilelayouts.com/pl/ss/1291.jpg

just a funny smokey picture. reminded me of it.

Re: bear back national park

Hehehee...
Bear back.

Re: Gummistone Park

umm tasty design