kagreeley wrote:it doesn't really matter if it's on point with comic styling or even with the derby rules. fact is, this is an anatomical reference and will be rejected. "schwing" means erection.
While I will not disagree that this is a horrible excuse for a potential printing entry, and is probably off-topic, lacking sufficient art to accompany the text, etc etc, I am not sure I agree with the accepted terminology of this term.
Though if all it takes to get something rejected is to call your roger by its name, I'll be the first in line to add "deformed otaku rodent" to Urban dictionary as slang for schlong.