Re: Happening at the party
This is funny and cute, but it seems a little long for a shirt design. I feel like it'd be better if you could have compacted it down into just 6 or maybe 9 boxes, instead of streching it out over 15.
I mean, the story comes across perfectly without a "the end" and also didn't really need three boxes of the cloud just standing around doing nothing in the begining. I just think if you'd streamlined the story into fewer boxes, then you could make the boxes a little bigger (if you want) which would make people get the joke faster.
Long as it is right now, if I walked past someone wearing this, I don't think I'd see it long enough to get it. I feel like you could make a shorter version of this and submit it as a v2 and let people vote between the two of them. You know, if you wanted to.