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Re: Robot in the Rain

Thanks for the comments guys. I think I agree with you for the dark blue shirt. I was thinking of overcast and that kinda goes with the baby blue color, but I think overall for the mood the navy would have been better. Hindsight heh.

Re: Umbrella Tree

Glad to see this approaching the fog. It is foggerificly nice. Wooo!

Re: Imagine

This is reeeeallly cool. +1

fishbiscuit5 wrote:This is really sweet. I like how you stay true to your style, Jas.

Jas, I hope you are marketing this style somewhere profitable. Your design is deceptively simple. The story in the design triggers pleasant childhood memories for many of your viewers. There's money in that combination.

Re: Teabags

Haha, this is funny, I like the style and the expressions on the teabags. I think it would look better on olive (one of the few shirts that would) - mostly so that you wouldn't need the olive-colored background behind the teabags. Also, I'm not a fan of olive on black or gray

Good luck!

linablade wrote:Beautiful design! Nice and clean. Loving the placement, too! I just wish it wasn't on the red. I feel like it clashes too much with your color choices. But that just may be because I'm not a fan of red shirts.

Seconded - I love the design! While the red shirt really does make the design pop, it is a little too clashing for my eyes. A little too much "pop" if that makes sense

Re: Rain, Rain, Go Away...v2

Very cool effect! Your designs are always so amazing.

WanderingRaccoon wrote:This is funny and cute, but it seems a little long for a shirt design. I feel like it'd be better if you could have compacted it down into just 6 or maybe 9 boxes, instead of streching it out over 15.

I mean, the story comes across perfectly without a "the end" and also didn't really need three boxes of the cloud just standing around doing nothing in the begining. I just think if you'd streamlined the story into fewer boxes, then you could make the boxes a little bigger (if you want) which would make people get the joke faster.

Long as it is right now, if I walked past someone wearing this, I don't think I'd see it long enough to get it. I feel like you could make a shorter version of this and submit it as a v2 and let people vote between the two of them. You know, if you wanted to.

Seconded. I don't know if there is enough time to resubmit, but I would encourage it! This has some great potential!

Re: Imagine Sunny Days

Nice, I really like the clean lines and simple design, and the colors look good on the green shirt. The texture isn't bad either. I do think it would look better a little smaller on the chest - maybe 2/3 the size? 1/2?

Re: Watching The Rain

This is a cute design! My sister loves cats, and I like the style of how this is drawn. The eyes are a little creepy, colored in solid like that though. I'm not sure why... maybe it makes me think of Jack Skellington from Nightmare Before Christmas

Re: Go Big or Go Home

Haha, this turned out very intense looking! Not at all like I imagined from the pre-derby thread! The textured background and the teeny drops are a nice touch. Good job

The raindrops in the background makes the composition a little difficult to focus on the main raindrop, since they are all multi-colored like the big guy. His glasses/goggles are a little strange too (though when playing Xtreme sports, eye protection is a must!)

Re: Raindrop Microcosm

I would love to see a closeup of each raindrop to see the detail - judging by the one shown, they are bound to be very interesting! Nice job on the dithering too, that must have taken forever. The turquoise water looks strange on the blue blue shirt however, perhaps consider putting it on a different color (asphalt? black? light blue?) or perhaps adjusting the hue value so that it's a little more blue and a little less green

Re: OH S*LT!

That text isn't incidental, I'm afraid this is due for the rejectionator. The parody of the Morton salt logo girl is probably ok, since it seems clear the joke is about her umbrella breaking, though don't quote me on that.

Re: Caught In The Rain

Hahaha, that's hilarious (and kinda sad...)

My one observation is that the snowman is melting on the side that is AWAY from the driving rain... where in reality he would melt on the side that is facing into the rain instead

runnerfrog13 wrote:Haha, this is funny, I like the style and the expressions on the teabags. I think it would look better on olive (one of the few shirts that would) - mostly so that you wouldn't need the olive-colored background behind the teabags. Also, I'm not a fan of olive on black or gray

Good luck!

Looking back I wish I'd gone for the olive tee myself. ^^; I think it's my second favorite tee color, next to the grass green. Thanks for your input!

runnerfrog13 wrote:Hahaha, that's hilarious (and kinda sad...)

My one observation is that the snowman is melting on the side that is AWAY from the driving rain... where in reality he would melt on the side that is facing into the rain instead

Oh, but the drips of melting snow being blown away from the hole in the side of mr. snowman are GREAT, I love how they were drawn!

Re: Rain Dance

This shirt reminds me so much of a story that was read to me as a child... The piggy in the puddle

"See the piggy in the puddle
the muddy little puddle..."

Re: I am the storm

I love this so much I can't even explain it this is so brilliant and well drawn!!!!! +1!!!

Question: navy or black? I can't tell.

runnerfrog13 wrote:This shirt reminds me so much of a story that was read to me as a child... The piggy in the puddle

"See the piggy in the puddle
the muddy little puddle..."

The Piggy in the Puddle

Re: Rain, Rain, Go Away...v2

wow!, its is a master piece! I love it so much!

great work my friend

and of course +1

Re: Rainy Sundae Morning

So good, so yummy!

Nice work!

Re: Rain of Fire

A clever dragon never lets a little weather get in the way of his devastation.

Re: Listen to the Rain~!

Why does this not have more votes!?

Re: Random Rainy Rabbits

I love these psychotic bunnies! I want this shirt, even if it doesn't print here. Let me know if it prints SOMEWHERE, k?

Re: Last Day at the Beach

Hey Snow - missed you these past weeks - glad to see you're back. I knew this was yours, has your signature, fantastic look. I'll never get over how much detail goes into your pieces, I really love the effect on the designs. Good luck to you - hope to see more of your entries in future derbies!

Re: Raindrop Microcosm

I think the only weakness in this design is how the colors in it clash with the color of shirt chosen. A different color and I'd totally be on board.

Re: Don't These Come in Monster Size?

cute cuteee <3 +1

Re: Check The Forecast!

Woe is me...passed in votes by the bunnies. ;)

Re: Rain of Fire

TROGDOR!!! But where are his wings and tail spikes? Guess it's just Trogdor's cousin...

I like the idea

Re: Safe and Warm

I resubmitted this with how it would look on a shirt, please go vote for it there thanks!

Re: Splish Splash. made by a kid

God, I hate it when people do stuff like that. It's cool if your kid wants to make a design like you did, but to put "made by a kid" in the title is pure pandering. Way to play on people's "awwwwwww" factor.

Re: Listen to the Rain~!

I like the music coming out of the cloud...but I don't understand why the cloud has buttons and patches....is this a song reference or something?

Re: Safe and Warm (RESUB)

This is my first shirt ever let me know what you think!

Re: Sidewalk Surfin

amaaaaazing waves... how do you it? great job!

Re: Still Raining

I appreciate the detail of the hand sticking out to test the waters :} <3

Re: Trading Places

Lol the cat looks a little more evil than it does mad/sad that it's outside, but your concept is unique and well done... gj B)

Re: on rainy days i go outside to play

Hilarious. It's always fun see a recurring character! Soon we will see all the seedy secrets that duck is hiding as the story continues to unravel. I'm just not buying his innocent little act this week. There's evil in this duck. I will not be fooled.

yankeebird wrote:God, I hate it when people do stuff like that. It's cool if your kid wants to make a design like you did, but to put "made by a kid" in the title is pure pandering. Way to play on people's "awwwwwww" factor.

Entirely his idea. Seriously. And he typed it himself.

Re: Too much rain

Thanks again everyone

It's not the fog, but this is a great result for me. I've only fogged once, I hope I can repeat soon hehe