midgerock wrote:the coloring is superb, chumpmagic.
I think what seems a bit off is the layout of sorts. I wonder if the figure was closer to the viewer and the floating home was back smaller it would even it out. Right now it seems a bit disjointed with him floating below it. I still dig the design I just wonder if that would help it.
Eh, its kind of the layout in general. It is unorthodox which usually turns people away here; they seem to what nothing new or unusual in the layout (for the most part). However, I am not going to let the stop me from having fun and doing what I want to do. Personally, I have no doubts that this would work well on a shirt, but many would probably have to see it to believe it.
Thank you for your comment. I appreciate it. I did want to make him more in the foreground, but that would mean that he would be looking off into the distance to establish the connection with him and the house. I didn't want to show just the back of his head; I wanted that pouty, sad face to be visible... if that make sense.