Re: Four Seasons In One Day
I love that you've done a different take on the four seasons than what we usually see. The colors are bright and lovely (and I keep pawing at that warm, warm orange...) I also love that the edges of the design are actually the edges of a leaf. Like leaves have fallen on top of the design, hiding it away from us, but the design still manages to shine through.
However, I think that the leaf in the center stands out too much. It's outlined very distinctly, making it feel forced, and I feel that it takes away from the overall design.
I'm wondering if, rather than having the leaf be blue (very nicely shaded, that it is), it would have looked less forced if the brown of the shirt had been allowed to be shown through there? The branches would lead into the leaf without outlining it heavily, so it would not stand out as obviously. It would probably also compliment the leafy edges of the design.