Derby #35: Spring
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Bee's On The Job

Bee's On The Job
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tgentry


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Great work on the perspective Skektek, I like it.

SkekTek


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tgentry wrote:Great work on the perspective Skektek, I like it.


Thanks! Wanted to give that "from inside the hive" look...

AdderXYU


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I really like the concept and colors, but the "hat-arm" throws it off for me, the way it swoops so circularly and tapers off to the hat. I think it'd have a much better effect if the hat was already on (antennae sticking out from it, obviously) and the arm was down like the briefcase, possibly holding a newspaper or something, but possibly just by itself.

SkekTek


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AdderXYU wrote:I really like the concept and colors, but the "hat-arm" throws it off for me, the way it swoops so circularly and tapers off to the hat. I think it'd have a much better effect if the hat was already on (antennae sticking out from it, obviously) and the arm was down like the briefcase, possibly holding a newspaper or something, but possibly just by itself.


The problem I had with that was the right arm then got mostly obscured (I had him holding an empty honey bear jar). I did forget to put a circle at the end for his hand though... Ah well.... Maybe I'll redo to take the black ink out (it's making the bee blacks look grayish) and experiment some more...

Thanks, Adder...

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