Derby #37: Greed

Chillaxin

It's really a great design, but it's not "greedy" enough. More "sloth-ish," isn't it?

Rejected because: It's really a great design, but it's not "greedy" enough. More "sloth-ish," isn't it?

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Amach06


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I think this is a perfect fit. Nice job.

Well there is always next year....

dekonstruct


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Amach06 wrote:I think this is a perfect fit. Nice job.


Thanks Amach06! It'd be cool if I could get them to print it up near the neck line somehow. It'd be like a bird necklace.

tiaerman


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Very good design! That bird looks so relaxed while the others are like "Who does he think he is..." Awesome!

There are 10 types of people: those who know binary, and those who don't.

tiaerman


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What? I saw greed all over this shirt! The bird in the middle is hogging almost the entire line. Taking way more than he needs at the expense of the other birds. Isn't that the definition of greedy?

There are 10 types of people: those who know binary, and those who don't.

dekonstruct


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tiaerman wrote:What? I saw greed all over this shirt! The bird in the middle is hogging almost the entire line. Taking way more than he needs at the expense of the other birds. Isn't that the definition of greedy?


obviously I agree with your exact points. Didn't think I needed to spell it out for everyone...

LoreHera


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I I think this one is great, and I would vote on it, as-is. But since they rejected it, maybe if you resubmitted it, and make the expression on the big guy's face show a little more greed, then they'd let it go through. I'd vote for sure!

tiaerman


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I would just resubmit as is maybe and explain in the first comment how it fits the theme... not sure if it would work, but its a thought

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micromarcie


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Maybe if the big bird looked less apathetic (sloth-like) and more...mean/greedy looking?
It's a good idea, I hope you can make it work.

BobLaubleau


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I don't see how this got rejected...the rejector just must not have got it.

you should resub with a little change. maybe you could add some poles to make it like a clothes line so it's clear that he's hogging all the space and there's nowhere else for the others to go....that's definitely greedy

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