Derby #37: Greed

Now the moon..the sun would wait til morning

Detail and shirt comp don't match.

Rejected because: Detail and shirt comp don't match.

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drdan152


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Re: Now the moon..the sun would wait til morning


what color is this shirt...grey or navy? awesome design though

makselarts


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I was shooting for the color Asphalt...I need a lot more pratice when it comes to displaying the art properly on a shirt. But thank you so much for the comment!

GravityJMB


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I love this design. Great job!

larushka


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Uuhm - I feel like I've seen variations of this design many times before under "Reach for the Moon - if you miss you'll land among the stars" ...

It's still a nice design though - just not super original

makselarts


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Larushka...do you think it is fair to say you THINK you have seen many versions of this? I created this artwork to depict someone gathering all the stars when that is enough wanting the moon..and when he has that going after the sun. If you THINK this has been done before feel free to use the red TATTLE button and actually show how I copied someone else. To infer I copied someone is not very fair!

bateater


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makselarts


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Thanks so much bateater!

kylemittskus


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I have never seen anything like this shirt. Nor does it make any sense to compare it to the cliche, aim for the moon and if you miss... This

"If drinking is bitter, change yourself to wine." -Rainer Maria Rilke

"Champagne is a very kind and friendly thing on a rainy night." -Isak Dinesen

ClayMeow


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Great concept, but doesn't GMV until you can show what colors will be used. Check out the official shirt.woot template, and update this please!

makselarts


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Hey Claymeow?? Not sure what your are asking. The color shown is Asphalt which is a woot color. The artwork is done in very muted colors. I believe the shirt picture is a fair representation of the finished product.. remember this is just a vote not a promise to buy. Thanks so much for looking!

makselarts


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I'm gonna clarify one more time..please forgive my newness with this whole process. I understand now the confusion with the color..I see now this works much better with a navy shirt not asphalt. Next entry I will use the official woot template. Soooo navy shirt....k

ClayMeow


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makselarts wrote:I'm gonna clarify one more time..please forgive my newness with this whole process. I understand now the confusion with the color..I see now this works much better with a navy shirt not asphalt. Next entry I will use the official woot template. Soooo navy shirt....k


Alright, you GMV . Great design.

makselarts


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Nevermore! thanks claymeow ; )

crazyunclejezzy


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You GMV! I really like the design you used. Very original. I hope this one wins, because it is the only shirt I would reeaaalllyy wear. I really like stars.

geoffreysteinman


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gmv...
the other shirts in this comp are just crudely done, or have a hard-to-understand concept.

lilozors


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GMV - I really like this concept! Hope it wins.

makselarts


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aerodino


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Resubmit your grey shirt - it's greyt! (sorry, pun intended)

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