Derby #38: The Year You Were Born

Coke PWN take 2

You need the year you were born in the title

Rejected because: You need the year you were born in the title

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sopranogrl22


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Re: Coke PWN take 2



In 1985, the Coca Cola company tried to reinvent itself, creatively calling their newer, sweeter product "New Coke." Consumers hated it, and in two months old school Coca Cola Classic ruled the shelves once again...

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sopranogrl22 wrote:In 1985, the Coca Cola company tried to reinvent itself, creatively calling their newer, sweeter product "New Coke." Consumers hated it, and in two months old school Coca Cola Classic ruled the shelves once again...

You still can't use that bottle shape or the swirl logo and you have to put the year in the title.

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sopranogrl22


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superspryte wrote:You still can't use that bottle shape or the swirl logo and you have to put the year in the title.


The bottle shape is totally different than the Coca Cola copyrighted shape...

sopranogrl22


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superspryte wrote:You still can't use that bottle shape or the swirl logo and you have to put the year in the title.


Oh geez, I'm an one that smells of Elderberries! Any way I can go in and add the date to the title??

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sopranogrl22 wrote:The bottle shape is totally different than the Coca Cola copyrighted shape...

Okay, then the logo, color (maybe, I can't tell if you changed it or not) and definitely the title.

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sopranogrl22


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sopranogrl22 wrote:Oh geez, I'm an one that smells of Elderberries! Any way I can go in and add the date to the title??


Guh? I didn't write that!

superspryte


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sopranogrl22 wrote:Oh geez, I'm an one that smells of Elderberries! Any way I can go in and add the date to the title??

You need to take it down and resub. Tha's the only way.

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sopranogrl22 wrote:Guh? I didn't write that!

Woot has filters.

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sopranogrl22


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superspryte wrote:You need to take it down and resub. Tha's the only way.


Oh, okay...*giggles*. Thanks for the help!

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sopranogrl22 wrote:Oh, okay...*giggles*. Thanks for the help!

No problem. Good luck with the resub!

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superspryte wrote:No problem. Good luck with the resub!


Thanks! =)

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sopranogrl22 wrote:In 1985, the Coca Cola company tried to reinvent itself, creatively calling their newer, sweeter product "New Coke." Consumers hated it, and in two months old school Coca Cola Classic ruled the shelves once again...


What part of the last rejection didn't you get?

sopranogrl22


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AdderXYU wrote:What part of the last rejection didn't you get?


Ummmm, I got all of it. They told me it needed a new bottle shape and a different color, so I changed those things about it. The reason it was rejected was because I stupidly forgot to include the year I was born in the title...glad you read the previous comments before you submitted your comment.

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