Derby #40: Motherhood
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Somebody's got to love them (resub)

Somebody's got to love them (resub)
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eHalcyon


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Ooh. Looks good on grass.

I didn't get a chance to comment on your other entry. I really like the scatter of flower petals.

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ommers74


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After much debate with the boyfriend, I decided green was a better color shirt for this design. And, I added the text, and made the design a little smaller.
If you already voted for the blue shirt version, and you like this better, please consider revoting
I don't expect to win, but everyone's feedback really helps me get better.
Leave a comment.
Thanks.

mylee712


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Looks great on green! I think your thumbnail selection is more revealing this time too! :-) By the way, I just received the fat unicorn shirt (which is on AA green) in the mail and love the color and the shirt!!:-) Your resumb's GM(re-)V!

heylindsay


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I definitely like this on green better, but I don't really care for the words on it. Keep up the great subs!

ommers74


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eHalcyon wrote:Ooh. Looks good on grass.

I didn't get a chance to comment on your other entry. I really like the scatter of flower petals.


Thanks!
Still trying to figure this designing stuff out - choosing the right color t-shirt, using an appropriately large or small thumbnail to catch everyone's eye, composing the design so it flows right on the shirt etc.

THink Ineed to take a leaf out of your book and get a little more "punchy" and less cute.

ommers74


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mylee712 wrote:Looks great on green! I think your thumbnail selection is more revealing this time too! :-) By the way, I just received the fat unicorn shirt (which is on AA green) in the mail and love the color and the shirt!!:-) Your resumb's GM(re-)V!


Thanks! I'm going to be away next week so might not get to come up with a design, but I'll try anyway. Thanks for leaving a comment - it really helps me figure out what works and what doesn't.

ommers74


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heylindsay wrote:I definitely like this on green better, but I don't really care for the words on it. Keep up the great subs!


Ah-ha! I wondered about the words too. I kind of feel the image should say it all, but then I chickened out 'cause so many other people chose to use text, and it seems to be working for them.
I will stick to my guns next time...

eHalcyon


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ommers74 wrote:Thanks!
Still trying to figure this designing stuff out - choosing the right color t-shirt, using an appropriately large or small thumbnail to catch everyone's eye, composing the design so it flows right on the shirt etc.

THink Ineed to take a leaf out of your book and get a little more "punchy" and less cute.


I thought mine was more cute than punchy. XP

I'm still new here... if you want to take a leaf out of a book, there are much better than me.

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