Derby #40: Motherhood

Too Many Gray Whites

I don't see Motherhood

Rejected because: I don't see Motherhood

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bafudg


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Re: Too Many Gray Whites


Why is this even Questionable. Big momma fish has too many babies. There is worse designs on here that make no sense and are kept up. Why do my designs continue to get rejected back to back?

bafudg


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Re: Too Many Gray Whites


What if I add a Title that says "Big Momma Fish" or "Too many basses to feed".? Would that blow the idea out there?

mjc613


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bafudg wrote:What if I add a Title that says "Big Momma Fish" or "Too many basses to feed".? Would that blow the idea out there?

Send a PM to superspryte in the morning to get advice on how to resubmit this. You will have to change more than the title, but I do not know what else.

I will say this: An average fish has lots of babies, and then goes away. They don't raise them like mammals do. But if you want to go with the idea of a Momma Fish, you might want to add more "kid fish" to the design.

bafudg


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Re: Too Many Gray Whites


so there is carp on here that can make uttter no sense at all but yet mine remotely resembles motherhood ( I guess) and it gets band. Sure!

bafudg


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bafudg


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oh i guess i cant type c -r -a- p

dhmarr


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Hah. In this case carp is a pun disguised as a typo. Nice job woot filter.

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