Re: First Love

Damn - there's some really stiff competition in this derby... It almost feels futile to even submit... but here's my second one anyway.

soulxside wrote:Damn - there's some really stiff competition in this derby... It almost feels futile to even submit... but here's my second one anyway.

Do you need the boxes around the figures?

Re: First Love

You've entered another shirt that I would actually wear. Thank you! Also, I like the boxes around the different pics. They accentuate the separateness of each part of the story. The neverending cycle of wanting, and losing. (at least that's how I see it) Good work

Squanderdalfast wrote:Do you need the boxes around the figures?

No, I guess not - but it was kinda telling a story this way... it was an artistic choice. Maybe it was the wrong one. People around here don't like frames?

sadnblue wrote:You've entered another shirt that I would actually wear. Thank you! Also, I like the boxes around the different pics. They accentuate the separateness of each part of the story. The neverending cycle of wanting, and losing. (at least that's how I see it) Good work

Thank you. I'm afraid this may be another shirt that you would actually wear, but will never be able to. ;)

Re: First Love

love the story. hope it gets printed!