Derby #63: Art as Text
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alphabetasaurus (variant)

alphabetasaurus (variant)
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tnt138


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This is just a variation. I have enlarged the dinos and rearranged them. I tilted the title so there would be more room. I tried it on all kinds of colors but didn't like how it looked on any of them. I'd like to know what everyone thinks so, please comment away...
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TNT

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Lhymes


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I loved the art in the 1st one, but the layout didn't really do anything for me. Honestly, this looks way better and you certainly have my vote for it.

BootsBoots


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Much better!


rachel1aaron


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Major improvement! The "bolder" letters suit the subject matter much better! GMV

donsolo5


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I like them both - but I do like the visibility of this one. I hope at least one of them gets printed....my favorite of the derby.

capttylor34


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donsolo5 wrote:I like them both - but I do like the visibility of this one. I hope at least one of them gets printed....my favorite of the derby.


Yes this works much better. Good choice on changing the background color too. this makes your design pop much more.

mamaGiraffe


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I definitely like it better on this color! And I also really like how you've enlarged the letters. Your textures/shading are awesome!! Great work!!

ciro


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tnt138 wrote:This is just a variation. I have enlarged the dinos and rearranged them. I tilted the title so there would be more room. I tried it on all kinds of colors but didn't like how it looked on any of them. I'd like to know what everyone thinks so, please comment away...
thanks,
TNT

This this one shows off your fantastic illustrations better than your previous entry!

curb1510


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I love the higher contrast. Just wonder if by making the individual drawings larger that they may look a bit cramped on the tee. The "i" for example looks a little lost.
Still, love black and will GMV.

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