Derby #65: Shirt as Costume
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andrewlb


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I like the design and detail but not so much the placement or overall look. I would suggest moving the design up, and also somehow make it look less like "a shirt on a shirt" and more just like a single shirt (note the rejected superhero designs, recent pirate design, etc.) Not exactly sure how you would make it mesh using a ref shirt, but I know you have great ideas

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iamjakex


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I would suggest maybe making the referee lines not all end in a 'box' like design, but make them look like they are coming through, or are torn.. otherwise it just looks like a square design on a white shirt, and its killing the concept right now imho.

antsyashley


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I bet it would be better on black....

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Stina9162


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yeah I like the idea, but it's a bit boxy

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