Re: [url=http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=25266]Inspired by
Its my first try at woot derby. Comments are appreciated.
Re: [url=http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=25266]Inspired by
Its my first try at woot derby. Comments are appreciated.
Re: [url=http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=25266]Inspired by
ROFL. Come on people, it *IS* amusing!
Ok, constructive criticism:
I personally like the colors. They are bright and they pop.
Within the context of this derby, this works. It fits the theme - It is a huckleberry (um, I am ASSUMING it is one, looks a little like a purple blueberry, and since I have never seen an actual huckleberry, I'll take your word on it), and it has fins.
It is amusing: one would not normally see fins on a fruit. This type of off-the-wall dichotomy is exactly at home here.
However:
Outside of the context of the derby, it just looks odd. That's why you are not getting votes. People wont want to wear a shirt that people will just look at and scratch their heads - unless, perhaps, it has a REALLY good backstory, just awaiting an unsuspecting questioner.
One other thing: Your shirt detail. That is the image that shows up on the main page. While this has to match the design itself, it can be only a PIECE of the design. Or have a small amount of text that wont appear on the shirt, such as CLICK ME. Whatever it is, it has to get people to want to click on it and see the full entry.
No clicks = no votes.
I hope I helped.
Good luck!!