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Instant Puberty

Instant Puberty
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eHalcyon


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Re: Instant Puberty


HA! Hilarious title, sir. I don't think it's conveyed very well in the design - after 60 days, I think you should add some detail to the image, including a big "Instant Puberty! in the background, and submit it on Threadless.

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Irrelevant


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eHalcyon wrote:HA! Hilarious title, sir. I don't think it's conveyed very well in the design - after 60 days, I think you should add some detail to the image, including a big "Instant Puberty! in the background, and submit it on Threadless.


good thinking. i was going to originally go with "i'm ready to grow up now" but i liked this title so much more when i was bouncing my title ideas off my brother.

either way, it's not a winning design here,but i'll probably throw it up somewhere else down the road and see where it goes from there. thanks e!

Irrelevant


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Also: on a sidenote....if anyone reads this and is NOT voting for, feel free to leave any thoughts on what should be worked on for it's future. keep in mind the art is not supposed to look the style of that plumber; i'm going for a a different aesthetic and a more bubbly look. but does it need other elements?

BootsBoots


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Irrelevant wrote:Also: on a sidenote....if anyone reads this and is NOT voting for, feel free to leave any thoughts on what should be worked on for it's future. keep in mind the art is not supposed to look the style of that plumber; i'm going for a a different aesthetic and a more bubbly look. but does it need other elements?


I agree with eHalc about adding the title into the design (for next time). I'd also move the guy back a little. It looks like he's standing just a little too far in front of the mushroom to be able to be looking at it like he is. Other than that it's great. Love the idea and the title.


cobolisdead


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Re: Instant Puberty


Mario reference for the win!

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carlover323


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Re: Instant Puberty


AWESOME!!!!!

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