Derby #76: Beginning
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Rise n' Shine!

Rise n' Shine!
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Barnhill5


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Gotta start the day... ugh... I am so NOT a morning person. And my coffee cup is actually MUCH bigger than the one depicted in this design

illuminator


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Oh! Mornings!!! That is a great way to get into the theme... wish I had thought of that, I'm not a morning person either!

carlover323


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nice graphics! love the tongue. i'm not one for mornings either..

cobolisdead


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I'd so buy this for my coffee addicted wife. I'm not allowed to speak to her until she has her morning coffee.

You can ride with me, or you can find your own path. Don't stab me in the back after I've cleared the way.

Barnhill5


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Thank you for the comments, everyone! I would also like some feedback as to how to better it, since it is not doing well in this here Derby... any constructive criticism available out there?

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This just doesn't scream "beginnings" to me...it screams "continuation of morning coffee addiction"...the style is awesome though. The concept just doesn't fit this derby for me personally.

ISO30


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I like the whole thing! Except for the bloodshot eyes... kinda gross. And the tongue. Also, I'm not a huge fan of yellow clocks or gray coffee cups. I love what you did with everything else, though! Fantastic!

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ISO30 wrote:I like the whole thing! Except for the bloodshot eyes... kinda gross. And the tongue. Also, I'm not a huge fan of yellow clocks or gray coffee cups. I love what you did with everything else, though! Fantastic!


I'm just kidding, you know. I figured it would be obvious, but don't want to leave any room for doubt. I think it's great and still surprised it doesn't have more votes.

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