Derby #76: Beginning
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The beginning of Assateague

The beginning of Assateague
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mjc613


quality posts: 48 Private Messages mjc613
Re: The beginning of Assateague


The horses are not the main focus of this drawing, and I think they need to be. I think this can be improved by
1 - making the ship smaller to seem further away and the horses larger
or 2- add more horses
or 3- some combo of these 2.

Love this idea, just concerned that you will lose votes


jda318


quality posts: 0 Private Messages jda318
mjc613 wrote:The horses are not the main focus of this drawing, and I think they need to be. I think this can be improved by
1 - making the ship smaller to seem further away and the horses larger
or 2- add more horses
or 3- some combo of these 2.

Love this idea, just concerned that you will lose votes


thanks! i appreciate the feedback. I'll try and work on it today and repost sometime.

bradyson


quality posts: 5 Private Messages bradyson
Re: The beginning of Assateague


I was not familiar with Assateague Isle before I saw this entry. Thanks, I have added to my Geography knowledge.

I agree the horses should have more of a focus.

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