Derby #84: The Sea
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Message in a Bottle

Message in a Bottle
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OnyxEyez


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Re: Message in a Bottle


I love the mermaid, but I feel like the design is unbalanced. If she was more curled around, maybe with the bottle in a more central placement?

Woot: x 41
Shirt.Woot: x 41
Sellout.Woot: x 11
Kids.Woot: x 4
Wine.Woot: x none. Wine gives me migraines. I'll take the cheese tho.

anatwork


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Re: Message in a Bottle


I actually like the composition here. I think the bottle provides enough of a counterbalance to the mermaids tail and I love the curve her torso and tail make. I'm just uncertain how the shirt will look on a girl person though.

Still, GMV.

TBird89


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Nice concept, although the mermaid seems a bit stretched out. It looks more like a woman half-eaten by a fish. I'd either shorten her tail or bring the fish half's start further up the torso; but that could just be me.

j0naht


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yeah, the composition needs a little adjusting I think. Nice job with the face. Something feels a little off with me about her arm like it needs to be a tad bit longer. The elbow I believe needs to go all the way to the belly button which is closer to where the fishy part starts. Keep up the good work!

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