Derby #84: The Sea
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Medusa of the Sea

Medusa of the Sea
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BootsBoots


quality posts: 37 Private Messages BootsBoots
Re: Medusa of the Sea


I love the swirlies in her hair. Maybe higher up and on a different colored shirt, it would work better. Actually, I whole design made out of the swirlies would be fantastic. I'm on board with the swirlies, can you tell?


Mavyn


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I agree with boots...I like the swirls, but the location...looks like it would be about crotch height? Not where most people want a woman's head.

You know what I mean!!!

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

Lamuril


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Not digging the grey, but I love the other colors in the swirls Too bad you couldn't finish it in time for the derby!

DexterousCerebrum


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Yeah, I was a little worried about the placement, but it looked weird centered. :/ I'm just glad anyone voted for me that wasn't related to me, haha.
Here are the other colors I considered...


DexterousCerebrum


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Lamuril wrote:Not digging the grey, but I love the other colors in the swirls Too bad you couldn't finish it in time for the derby!


Thank you for the compliments, and the crit. I'm still learning, so I'm happy to take the criticism.

I actually stopped watching woot derbies for a while because I've been busy with school, and I only found out today what the theme was... this is actually a mod of a shirt I never submitted waaay back in August, don't even remember what the theme was.

LDrees


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I would be all over this if the design placement was different, I love the design but I can already hear the bad crotch jokes... Maybe if you stretched it across the shirt diagonally and made it look like she was floating.... dunno, not an artist, I just really wish I could vote for this, but at this point I wouldn't wear it. Beautiful work though.

sokowa


quality posts: 3 Private Messages sokowa
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I'm with the rest of the group that says the placement is . . . odd. But hey, that's the easiest thing to correct going forward. Whatever you do, do NOT change your style. I love the colors, the swirls and the balance of solid color and line art. Want . .to . .see . . more!

cabbit56


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DexterousCerebrum wrote:Yeah, I was a little worried about the placement, but it looked weird centered. :/ I'm just glad anyone voted for me that wasn't related to me, haha.
Here are the other colors I considered...



love it on brown. but the placement... when it's on white it looks like a cartoonish bush from afar ahuhu

singingbarista


quality posts: 0 Private Messages singingbarista
DexterousCerebrum wrote:Yeah, I was a little worried about the placement, but it looked weird centered. :/ I'm just glad anyone voted for me that wasn't related to me, haha.
Here are the other colors I considered...



LOVE the brown & the green-they really bring out the design. And I'm messy and spill stuff on myself, so I can't justify purchasing a light colored shirt. But great design!

jpmillman


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This is wonderful

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jasneko


quality posts: 30 Private Messages jasneko

Pretty colors but kind of strange location... maybe if the swirls went a bit higher.. good use of a white tee though! I like the way it looks with it.


czs


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DexterousCerebrum wrote:Yeah, I was a little worried about the placement, but it looked weird centered. :/ I'm just glad anyone voted for me that wasn't related to me, haha.
Here are the other colors I considered...



That green is sweet!

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