Derby #88: Music
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Where's Everybody Going? (resubmitted)

Where's Everybody Going? (resubmitted)
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Anthony3419


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So anyone who listens to an Ipod is a rat or a loner? I just opened a can. Whoops...*runs away grinning*

edit: or the cat won't chase the mouse because he has an Ipod?


immortalight


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I hope I've done this correctly. I did try the other colors in the flute and the notes, but I couldn't get it to where I was happy with the result so for now, I went with the original. I will keep the good advice in mind for my next submission.

immortalight


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Anthony3419 wrote:So anyone who listens to an Ipod is a rat or a loner? I just opened a can. Whoops...*runs away grinning*

edit: or the cat won't chase the mouse because he has an Ipod?


I think it's open to interpretation. my idea was that, in the story, the rats all get lead out of town to their messy, rat-deaths, because they can't resist the piper's music, so if you're doing your own thing, listening to your own tunes, you'll be O.K. and not a messy dead rat. But I like your interpretation too.

immortalight


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PS It's probably bad etiquette or something to comment 500 times on your own drawing, but I wanted to say, that it never occurred to me that there would only be one color of shirt available. I thought anyone who ordered would get to choose a color. I'm learning!

wizzdingo


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I like the changes, and the shirt color. It just gives it a more polished look I feel. Hopefully you at least get your old votes back. And yeah, definatly keep in mind clever uses of all 6 colors on future shirts. (Even if you want minimal color, try using a color for shading etc.)

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wizzdingo


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Oh, and you MIGHT want to consider adding your design to you Sig. Which can be found under "My Account"

The format goes something like this:

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For this design:

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:just copy and paste that.

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Mavyn


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I like the concept, and the figures are clean and appealing, but the grey spots? I don't get their role in the picture, and the 'squared' sides of the one bottom right is distracting.

My speech is not parsing. I am speaking in ellipsis.

Muskratio


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I LOVE the play on the Pied Piper! I adore this design. It's the only one I've seen that I know I'd definitely buy.

immortalight


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Muskratio wrote:I LOVE the play on the Pied Piper! I adore this design. It's the only one I've seen that I know I'd definitely buy.


Thank you so much for the encouraging comment!!!

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