Derby #92: Steampunk
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the steam punk

the steam punk
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databit


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Two Words: Awesome.

/Love the effort she is putting into the spring key.

databit


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Double post.
Double post.
Ignore.
Ignore.

kaseyfleming


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up close!!

kdubbs29


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I absolutely love the robot, but the styles of the robot and girl seem too mismatched for my liking. It seems very foreign.

melite


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kdubbs29 wrote:I absolutely love the robot, but the styles of the robot and girl seem too mismatched for my liking. It seems very foreign.


Agreed - seems like the girl should be in 'older' clothing instead of that which seems to be more popular now.

Also, the steam seems to look like misplace angel wings and less like steam.

maybe more like girl 1

girl 2

girl 3

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iknc4miles


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Does this remind anyone else of Bioshock? Completely different design and artwork, but the little sister with the big daddy is creepy and cool.

Awesome job.

riffmaster18


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iknc4miles wrote:Does this remind anyone else of Bioshock? Completely different design and artwork, but the little sister with the big daddy is creepy and cool.

Awesome job.


that was my first thought too

I really like this one


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jasneko


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The thumbnail is so creepy, and then "poof" you see the whole thing, and it's different ... still creepy, but not in a really scary kind of way anymore;)

Vote!

braveBebe


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The two in one styles would be fine maybe if the robot was colored. But i like the artistic work, good job!

melite


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braveBebe wrote:The two in one styles would be fine maybe if the robot was colored. But i like the artistic work, good job!


Dunno, to me steampunk is supposed to feel older more "western" almost and the robot seems like he could fit then, but the girl seems like something off a disney show.

I like having the girl up there and the concept of her, just don't think she fits with the whole steampunk feel.

Just my opinion, I like the concept and the work a lot though.

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melite wrote:...to me steampunk is supposed to feel older more "western" almost...


*Victorian

melite


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SeraphSix wrote:*Victorian


Thanks, I was having trouble thinking of the word. :D

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elwayman02


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I agree with the above comments about the girl. They don't work together.

kdubbs29


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I think this would be absolutely sick with a few changes: 1) ditch the girl completely 2) tone down the eyes of the robot slightly and maybe rough them up to match the rest of the robot 3) rough the key up to match the rest of the robot. 95% of the robot is f'ing amazing. Its so close to perfection.

icymallard


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i actually kind of like the contrast of the girl there... yea she seems maybe out of place but that would actually be a reason for me to wear something like this..

it provides an even more twisted fantasy...

Bombared


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I really do like this design, and the one without the girl. However, I think the style of the girl detract. Clean lines, pigtails, etc is all cool. I like that. It's the wardrobe choice.

The sock pattern is strange, I'm not found of the the plain miniskirt, and the colors are just too pastel and pale. Clothing with a bit more to look at like a gypsy type skirt, and some shirt to match the style would be ideal for my tastes. If the colors were changed to something brighter, though, I'd still buy one :D

So there's my 2cents.

glendower


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I like this one a lot. Was it inspired by Xenogears? It seems like an intentional allusion to Seibzehn and Maria... I would probably buy two!

rhanson


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Lose the girl and I'd want one.

the1sonofslam


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melite wrote:Agreed - seems like the girl should be in 'older' clothing instead of that which seems to be more popular now.

Also, the steam seems to look like misplace angel wings and less like steam.

maybe more like girl 1

girl 2

girl 3


Agree with both. New Anime style clashes with the dirty grit of the robo. girl 1

girl 2
would be perfect in her place.

the1sonofslam


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melite wrote:Agreed - seems like the girl should be in 'older' clothing instead of that which seems to be more popular now.

Also, the steam seems to look like misplace angel wings and less like steam.

maybe more like girl 1

girl 2

girl 3


Agree with both. New Anime style clashes with the dirty grit of the robo. girl 1

girl 2
would be perfect in her place.

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