Derby #92: Steampunk
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Mechanical Heart

Mechanical Heart
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erei


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Hello everyone!
This is my second submission to woot.com ...
(Please treat me kindly!)

There are some really great entries already!

In any case, if you're interested in seeing a full view with more details (since I omgwin! at the preview images...)
Please click here!
http://i2.photobucket.com/albums/y23/eRei/details.jpg

It was quite interesting trying to do this with only 6 colors and in a flat matter. I'm much more used to doing soft shading..

databit


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Um, is that a tube running into... And she has on a ...
I hope this comes in a size for my 1 year old!

erei


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databit wrote:Um, is that a tube running into... And she has on a ...
I hope this comes in a size for my 1 year old!



:D yes and.. yes...
and.. I hope so too?

elwayman02


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The border on the right makes it feel a little boxy. If you could fix that, it would look great!

melite


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I agree about the box thing on the right.

I don't understand why she is bent the way she is and where her other arm is.

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xaon


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really well-illustrated i love it

byrbwr


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ok, this is hot. yummy.

Scathraax


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Amazing design. I'd wear it every chance I get! :D

erei


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melite wrote:I agree about the box thing on the right.

I don't understand why she is bent the way she is and where her other arm is.



Originally the whole thing was in a box, and I took off one side. But this is a good point! I'll try it out.

kdubbs29


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databit wrote:Um, is that a tube running into... And she has on a ...
I hope this comes in a size for my 1 year old!


I know woot likes things PG13 or safer and the underboob might be cutting it a bit close. Just a word of warning.

fairnymph


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I would dig this without the blue box behind her. :\

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erei


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fairnymph wrote:I would dig this without the blue box behind her. :\


XD yes this seems to be the general opinion ..
I'll have to try and make a revised one soon.

erei


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kdubbs29 wrote:I know woot likes things PG13 or safer and the underboob might be cutting it a bit close. Just a word of warning.


Ahhh thank you for the tip~

jshinevisuals


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dope one!
the underboob is spot on!

chade2001


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this looks really nice!

gone!

fnarfnar


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The shirt looked cool in the thumbnail, but when I clicked I discovered that the main message of the picture is not cool heart/tubes/medical/mechanical awesomeness, but stereotyped freakishly skinny underboob woman. BLEH.

wickedDesigns


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I really like it, except for the waist. Cutting her off there on the left like that just looks strange, especially since the belt continues out to where she should. If you resub, maybe carry that side of her down to the hip. Otherwise, I think it's beautiful.

antsyashley


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I agree with everyone's criticisms, but I still love the design. GMV. I'd wear it as-is, or with changes. Very cool. I hope woot does not censor.

Drakxxx


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Awesome character design and detail. I really like the colors as well. I see were her waist is cut off, and think it would help the image overall if the body shape continued on a bit more, but otherwise this looks really great.


yakub89


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databit wrote:Um, is that a tube running into... And she has on a ...
I hope this comes in a size for my 1 year old!


You're the one who's cat has a pointy nipple ear. :p jk jk (sorry couldn't resist)

endejester


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I like her face, and the idea behind this but I'd really adjust how you have her waist cut off, it looks like she's been pinched down to nothing at first glance rather than looking like she's cut off for the design... otherwise I think you have what could be an awesome idea going!

kittypoocaca


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I love this...love it!

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