Derby #92: Steampunk
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Feathered Heart

Feathered Heart
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erei


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My second design. I haven't resubmitted the boxless version of my steampunk girl.

Mmm. I was kind of iffy about the white text, but I felt that it still needed something in the background. Hope you guys like it!

Jakeworld


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erei wrote:My second design. I haven't resubmitted the boxless version of my steampunk girl.

Mmm. I was kind of iffy about the white text, but I felt that it still needed something in the background. Hope you guys like it!


While I am typically not a fan of symmetric designs on a shirt, I feel that the white text in the background along with the detail within the main design have a significantly distinguishing effect on the overall picture. I find myself looking at the entire design rather than just one side, which really allows me to appreciate it that much more.

I really like the colors and think the background gives the design a nice touch. I think you really hit dead on with the theme and am impressed with the quality of both of your submissions. Awesome job!

MadamAtom


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erei wrote:I was kind of iffy about the white text, but I felt that it still needed something in the background.


I think you're right--the device itself is neat, but I think the diagrams really make the design complete. Voted!

erei


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Jakeworld wrote:While I am typically not a fan of symmetric designs on a shirt, I feel that the white text in the background along with the detail within the main design have a significantly distinguishing effect on the overall picture. I find myself looking at the entire design rather than just one side, which really allows me to appreciate it that much more.

I really like the colors and think the background gives the design a nice touch. I think you really hit dead on with the theme and am impressed with the quality of both of your submissions. Awesome job!


Thank you ! That was a very in depth and kind review. I'm glad that I decided to keep the additional text.

erei


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MadamAtom wrote:I think you're right--the device itself is neat, but I think the diagrams really make the design complete. Voted!


I just hope that they would show up if it were to be printed~

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