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Clueless

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cobolisdead


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Neat, but I like the LOLcat Clue design a bit better.

You can ride with me, or you can find your own path. Don't stab me in the back after I've cleared the way.

mfulkron80


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cobolisdead wrote:Neat, but I like the LOLcat Clue design a bit better.


I would say the little smiley faces are absolutely unnecessary.

mfulkron80


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cobolisdead wrote:Neat, but I like the LOLcat Clue design a bit better.


I would say the little smiley faces are absolutely unnecessary.

lewiswilde


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I agree, I'm not a fan of the smiles either...I'd also like to see it on something other than black.

monkeyswag


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Clever. Funny. WTG.

omnitarian


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I didn't even notice the smiles. Yeah, those aren't necessary.

cobolisdead


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They must be happy because they all murdered Gray. They all hated him, those racist crayolas!

Yeah, I didn't even notice the smiles either. It does make it a little creepy and a bit more awesome.

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faultylogic83


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considering the blood splatter i think we can safely rule out the red crayon with the rope.

PeriwinkleHat


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I love (*LOVE*) the idea, but something about the execution doesn't do it for me. Maybe it's the fact that the lines look sort of lopsided and lazily drawn (which could be the charm of this design to other people, it just isn't for me), or maybe it's the little smiles. I would want to see this exact idea resub'd in a different style.

Until I buy something, I can't vote anyhow, but I'd probably not vote for this one.

JJJSchmidt


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I just really don't get it.
I mean I understand it, but why is this in the fog. Could someone explain to me why this is good in any way?
I am not trying to be mean, it's just seems amateurish and not in a good way.

peppersagooddog


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white crayons are cursed.

snappystrappy


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I just don't get why they are crayons

AdderXYU


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snappystrappy wrote:I just don't get why they are crayons


crayons have colors.

Seriously, I'm baffled by this whole clue vs. clue thing. Barring all other considerations, one makes total sense while parodying the game (the people all have color names, while this is literally colors represented as them), and the other is cats.

Would I like to see any clue entries print? Not particularly. But I'm shocked this is hard to understand.

RaefWolfe


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Get rid of the hokey smiles and you've got yourself a vote.

HeartlineTwist


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According to Wikipedia, Crayola makes neither mustard nor peacock (blue) colored crayons. For anyone that cares about that sort of thing.

mrwednesday


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HeartlineTwist wrote:According to Wikipedia, Crayola makes neither mustard nor peacock (blue) colored crayons. For anyone that cares about that sort of thing.


I find that kind of funny because the last time I saw one of those giant 12 lb boxes of crayons they had some pretty effin' ridiculous colors.

KessiTheNinja


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mfulkron80 wrote:I would say the little smiley faces are absolutely unnecessary.


Agreed

lmasullo


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really creative.. i think its awesome! =]

cashie


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...i dont get it...perhaps im just extra slow today but... im missing something

snarkygal


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I think this is a very clever way to do a Clue-based shirt. Well done. And I think the smiley faces are cute.

mcowles


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I don't mind the smiley faces... it looks kinda like they're trying to look all innocent...

I don't like the dashed chalk outline... aren't all chalk outlines solid? why is this one dashed?

iloveengl


quality posts: 3 Private Messages iloveengl
JJJSchmidt wrote:
I mean I understand it, but why is this in the fog. Could someone explain to me why this is good in any way?


So...this is not nor ever has been in the fog. Particularly for a guy without a single buy, you are making far too many odd critiques my friend.

eHalcyon


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iloveengl wrote:So...this is not nor ever has been in the fog. Particularly for a guy without a single buy, you are making far too many odd critiques my friend.


Actually, it was in the fog at the beginning of the derby.

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