Derby #104: Tattoo
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Number One Threat To America

Number One Threat To America
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dankstick


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This is the most I have ever worked on any derby entry! Thanks to those in the forums that helped out, much appreciated.

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capedcrusader514


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awesome idea, the hair drives me crazy though.

JustJiggles


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I'll vote for anything with a Care Bear.

kdubbs29


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Hilarious take on the derby! Brilliant!

jasneko


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Ha, the thought of ALL the carebears having to go through this on their bellies... hilarious!

izikoo


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capedcrusader514 wrote:awesome idea, the hair drives me crazy though.


Agreed. Great concept, poorly executed. I suggest some rework and a resub.

supersonic213


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He looks like he's in so much pain. Maybe if he appeared to enjoy it, it would add some humor to the piece. If you are planning on re-working it, consider that? I'd hate to see such a great concept miss out on its potential.

The guys at the new SONIC drive-in told me to have a supersonic day. And I did!

dankstick


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supersonic213 wrote:He looks like he's in so much pain. Maybe if he appeared to enjoy it, it would add some humor to the piece. If you are planning on re-working it, consider that? I'd hate to see such a great concept miss out on its potential.


Thanks SuperSonic. If I get some irresistible protips then I will resub. Right now my skills aren't that super-sonic. I posted this in the forums, showed my friends and used all their advice. I learn more each derby and it is really fun to compete in. If I re-work things the end result will be of a similar quality. Thanks for looking and I want some tater tots now...mmmm

oldtdevil


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Frickin' Hilarious!

Reawen


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Hahahaha! Very funny!

kylemittskus


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supersonic213 wrote:He looks like he's in so much pain. Maybe if he appeared to enjoy it, it would add some humor to the piece. If you are planning on re-working it, consider that? I'd hate to see such a great concept miss out on its potential.


The fact that he's in so much pain makes it that much funnier! Tattoos don't feel good, but it's a care bear rite of passage.

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peppersagooddog


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kylemittskus wrote:The fact that he's in so much pain makes it that much funnier! Tattoos don't feel good, but it's a care bear rite of passage.




damn right. chest is one of the most painful areas, and thats where he is working on him (bear). would look balderah if the bear was happy.

MoreFull


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Punisher Bear. Awesome.

You. Keep being awesome.

devdave


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you know what tho, i brought a mini care bear (even blue) at the supermarket the other week (after much hassling from my 2 year old) and it actually has a similar expression to this! so its totally lagit.

devdave


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devdave wrote:you know what tho, i brought a mini care bear (even blue) at the supermarket the other week (after much hassling from my 2 year old) and it actually has a similar expression to this! so its totally lagit.


forgot to add..awesome idea btw.

byrbwr


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can you tap him for black mana?

eHalcyon


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dankstick wrote:Thanks for looking and I want some tater tots now...mmmm


Unrelated to the design - I read that as "taser tots". Awesome.

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supersonic213


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kylemittskus wrote:The fact that he's in so much pain makes it that much funnier! Tattoos don't feel good, but it's a care bear rite of passage.


I just thought it would have crossed crossed into sheer hilarity if he had a goofy, evil grin the whole time. A little "MUAHAHAAAAAAAA", if you will. ^_^

Love this guy's entries. Something crazy every week for my enjoyment.

The guys at the new SONIC drive-in told me to have a supersonic day. And I did!

rlaskew


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I just got the weirdest look because I just cracked up laughing in a completely quiet office. Thanks for that. Love the shirt.

BaldBob007


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And another dankstick classic. This is so hilarious that it should be illegal.

IndependentVik


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izikoo wrote:Agreed. Great concept, poorly executed. I suggest some rework and a resub.


What exactly would you like to see reworked?

dankstick


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supersonic213 wrote:I just thought it would have crossed crossed into sheer hilarity if he had a goofy, evil grin the whole time. A little "MUAHAHAAAAAAAA", if you will. ^_^

Love this guy's entries. Something crazy every week for my enjoyment.


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