Derby #108: Architecture
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The Candy Isn't Worth It

The Candy Isn't Worth It
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jasneko


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The house looks fantastic, nicely done... I kind of wish the trick-or-treater matched the rest of the design better, it looks a bit too cartoony somehow compared to the rest of the design.

Vote!

xxchange


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jasneko wrote:The house looks fantastic, nicely done... I kind of wish the trick-or-treater matched the rest of the design better, it looks a bit too cartoony somehow compared to the rest of the design.


I agree, that was the one thing I didn't really like.

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binkdrop


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Love the style you drew and colored the house and surrounding bits in. I too was slightly distracted by the trick-or-treater though, just because he does have color and does look more cartoony than the rest of the image. Of course you couldn't at all do without him, but I wish he was in the same colors and style as the house.

Neat idea and good luck in the derby!

hananoheiwa


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Love it. GMV

Drakxxx


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Very nice! I really like the concept and Halloween is right around the corner.


anjulka


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I think it's a great design. I love the little kid. It provides a wonderful contrast.

yumac29


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Drakxxx wrote:Very nice! I really like the concept and Halloween is right around the corner.


I actually clicked on this one thinking it was you. Really well done truffle

Nothing like a good shirt.woot argument. Gets me through a whole class.

truffleshuffle


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Thanks everyone for the compliments and the votes! I see what some of you mean about the little kid being a bit cartoon-y, but I sorta liked that juxtaposition between the cute, innocent little guy and the foreboding creepiness of the house in front of him. I appreciate the feedback though

solvaring


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This is excellent GMV!

blambelet


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Awesome work. I love the contrast between the kid and the house. Good work truffle!

nantes89


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I disagree, candy is always worth it.

IowaHawkeye


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I love the detail. The little boy is great. I love the way he stopped short and is looking up at the house pondering his choice. GMV.

cmdixon2


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nantes89 wrote:I disagree, candy is always worth it.


I'd knock on that door for a Reese's cup.

archangel5784


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The boy is too cartoony? His body shape is really quite realistic, especially when compared to the house... now THAT is cartoony.

What's distracting is that the boy actually has color, compared the gray/black of the entire rest of the shirt.

bluetuba


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I like this shirt, love Halloween stuff. I like how the kid sticks out because he's the punchline of the shirt. The creepy house is cool and all, but the little trick-or-treater kid standing there looking at it makes it darkly amusing. If the kid didn't have some color and stick out he might just blend in with the tombstones and the "joke" would be obscured.

truffleshuffle


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cmdixon2 wrote:I'd knock on that door for a Reese's cup.


Reese's cups are pretty good...but I think I'd have to hold out for a Baby Ruth;) You could probably entice me to my death with one of those.

HalfWheat


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Go ahead, little fella. I bet they have really good home-made candies in that house. Bwa ha ha!

truffleshuffle


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I just suddenly lost at least 6 votes...maybe more. Did I do something wrong? Where did all the love go?

EDIT: Oh...they're all back now...that was weird...I check this website too much...and love ellipses

paulkremer


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Well drawn! My only thought would be that the design is a tad too large on the shirt for my taste.

IncurableHumanist


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GREAT ART! But it's just not something I can see myself wearing on a shirt

tamiurban


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I so want this shirt to win! Got to have it!

BenjCra03


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truffleshuffle wrote:Thanks everyone for the compliments and the votes! I see what some of you mean about the little kid being a bit cartoon-y, but I sorta liked that juxtaposition between the cute, innocent little guy and the foreboding creepiness of the house in front of him. I appreciate the feedback though


To me this is what sells the design. that childish/like fear.

TedHalpert


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Wonderful. I love it. This is the only shirt that has my vote in this derby.

HalfWheat


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Okay, I've been looking at this for how many days, and I just realized that the at the top of the house, the dormer windows look like eyes, and the long windows below are a crazy evil grin. Yeah, I'm slow, but I get there eventually.

When I'm out running errands, I usually have my keys in my pocket and there's a little Intel bunnyman on the keychain hanging out of my pocket. If I was wearing this shirt, that guy on my keys would be like another halloween kid, probably standing back and egging this guy on to go knock on the door first.

mysticwind21


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I love the shirt. Its definitly the one I want.

ShirtFight


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This design is fantastic, I want it now! Great skills and and looks awesome as a tee...

truffleshuffle


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Thanks everybody for the wonderful comments and support!

xxchange


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truffleshuffle wrote:Thanks everybody for the wonderful comments and support!


If you put this shirt up for sale anywhere else, please let us know! I would love to buy it!

My Colors: 6 Black, 9 Asphalt, 6 Cranberry, 4 Royal Blue, 9 Navy, 3 Silver, 5 Grass, 2 Orange, 2 Kelly Green, 7 Brown, 1 White, 2 Lemon, 6 Baby Blue, 2 Cream, 2 Heather Gray, 4 Olive, 1 Pink

Last 12 of 71: The Raven, Mon Petit Chou, Navy Seals, Give me another drink, Procrastination University, Mr. Fallwinter, Nature Owl, In the Library With the Wrench, Fall, Autumn = Embarrassment, You Have To Try This Guys, Imposter

tamiurban


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Please Please Please.....with Halloween just around the bend....I'm in love with this shirt.....

....whimper.....Turban

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