Derby #115: National Parks
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Raven Sanctuary Final (?) Resub

Raven Sanctuary Final (?) Resub
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genericsmith


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Re: Raven Sanctuary Final (?) Resub


Now with correct spelling!

Please vote... Comment. Etc.

Munchy Attack If you can find the name of this artist & real song title I'll buy you a daily woot shirt (your choice what day)

Dystopia Dark Lager, Where the Wild Parties at?, B.A. Bearacus, and many more wanted in XXL(PLEASE!!!)
Edgar Allen Poe shall remained headlock'd until Nevermore is reckoned.

tgentry


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Litter Nevermore gets a chuckle and a vote from me.

durwoody


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Love the reference to Edgar Allan Poe, just think the dark brown shirt is a little too dark to make this design really pop. Love the creativity though.

genericsmith


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durwoody wrote:Love the reference to Edgar Allan Poe, just think the dark brown shirt is a little too dark to make this design really pop. Love the creativity though.


Do a lot of other people feel this way about the color?

If it'd help with votes I could probably do some color changing today.

I'm pretty disappointed with the amount of votes this shirt is getting so I'd like some feedback of what I could do different. Especially if it's just colors or something.

Munchy Attack If you can find the name of this artist & real song title I'll buy you a daily woot shirt (your choice what day)

Dystopia Dark Lager, Where the Wild Parties at?, B.A. Bearacus, and many more wanted in XXL(PLEASE!!!)
Edgar Allen Poe shall remained headlock'd until Nevermore is reckoned.

JesseBYAH


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genericsmith wrote:Do a lot of other people feel this way about the color?

If it'd help with votes I could probably do some color changing today.

I'm pretty disappointed with the amount of votes this shirt is getting so I'd like some feedback of what I could do different. Especially if it's just colors or something.


Hmmmm well, you could possibly swap the two main colors - make the rest of his uniform a dark brown (hat and pants) and make the shirt a kelly green or something. I'm not sure. Sorry you're not getting more votes, this is a very creative design =( stupid colorful stolen sequoia shirts be dammed! (not tgentry's- you know which ones I'm talking about)

JesseBYAH


quality posts: 5 Private Messages JesseBYAH
genericsmith wrote:Do a lot of other people feel this way about the color?

If it'd help with votes I could probably do some color changing today.

I'm pretty disappointed with the amount of votes this shirt is getting so I'd like some feedback of what I could do different. Especially if it's just colors or something.


Hmmmm well, you could possibly swap the two main colors - make the rest of his uniform a dark brown (hat and pants) and make the shirt a kelly green or something. I'm not sure. Sorry you're not getting more votes, this is a very creative design =( stupid colorful stolen sequoia shirts be dammed! (not tgentry's- you know which ones I'm talking about)

JesseBYAH


quality posts: 5 Private Messages JesseBYAH
JesseBYAH wrote:Hmmmm well, you could possibly swap the two main colors - make the rest of his uniform a dark brown (hat and pants) and make the shirt a kelly green or something. I'm not sure. Sorry you're not getting more votes, this is a very creative design =( stupid colorful stolen sequoia shirts be dammed! (not tgentry's- you know which ones I'm talking about)


Whoops, double post. Sorry.

genericsmith


quality posts: 15 Private Messages genericsmith
JesseBYAH wrote:Hmmmm well, you could possibly swap the two main colors - make the rest of his uniform a dark brown (hat and pants) and make the shirt a kelly green or something. I'm not sure. Sorry you're not getting more votes, this is a very creative design =( stupid colorful stolen sequoia shirts be dammed! (not tgentry's- you know which ones I'm talking about)


Yeah... Next derby I'm going to try and go brighter... Most of my recent shirts have been on the darker tones.

I know there's more important things than votes... but... idk... I guess I need to call more attention to myself... I'm going to start commenting on EVERYONE'S designs... and argue... just for the sake of arguing.

Not really.

I do appreciate your comments and yeah... I know what stupid shirts you're talking about.

Munchy Attack If you can find the name of this artist & real song title I'll buy you a daily woot shirt (your choice what day)

Dystopia Dark Lager, Where the Wild Parties at?, B.A. Bearacus, and many more wanted in XXL(PLEASE!!!)
Edgar Allen Poe shall remained headlock'd until Nevermore is reckoned.

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