http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3473/3961431386_33e6932e31_o.jpg

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ASS! I don't know what I am doing here! follow this link for a large version of the shirt! I thought this would popst the art, not the placement!

http://www.flickr.com/photos/mr_rocks/3961431386/?edited=1

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here you go!

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3473/3961431386_33e6932e31_o.jpg

Re: No More Mr. Nice Guy!

here you go!

[/img]http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3473/3961431386_33e6932e31_o.jpg[/img]

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Last attempt!

MrRocks wrote:Last attempt!

nice illo as always

bugger it! aplogies folks...

MrRocks wrote:here you go!

[/img]http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3473/3961431386_33e6932e31_o.jpg[/img]

Take out the slash in the first [/img] and that should do the trick.

Also, this might not be considered "incidental" text. But, that's for woot to decide.

Ah, I see you were able to get your img to display. Disregard my initial post.

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Too much text. Far, far too much. Even if it doesn't get rejected and somehow manages to place, I don't think the text will not print well. You can look at Nevermore for an example.

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Do you have a web comic, your art tells me that you should. I like it a lot.

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This is really good, but not for Woot.

Draug wrote:Too much text. Far, far too much. Even if it doesn't get rejected and somehow manages to place, I don't think the text will not print well.

Seconded ... plus, there's having to look hard at a shirt and then there's having to stop and read it for five minutes ... plus, is that a Woot shirt color? Doesn't look to me like asphalt, and it certainly isn't heather grey.

Great as a webcomic, as someone said--or maybe a poster. Not good, I think, as a shirt.

Draug wrote:Too much text. Far, far too much. Even if it doesn't get rejected and somehow manages to place, I don't think the text will not print well. You can look at Nevermore for an example.

I agree. The text completely overpowers the design. It actually hurts my eyes to try and read. I'll be surprised if it's not rejected.

Btw...I have Nevermore, and the text looks just fine.

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I disagree with the text completely overpowering the design, as while it works as a design element, I don't think it has to be read at all for the shirt's message/joke to come across.

IMHO, anyone who's read enough vintage comics has seen the old 'Charles Atlas' type ads hundreds of times, and will grasp and appreciate the parody almost immediately from the pictures alone.

[quote postid="3511106" user="MrRocks"]Last attempt!

There is a typo in the "28 Days Later" square. It says "I don't feel to good", but should really say "I don't feel too good" - two O's needed in "too".

Totally love it. Although it does feel a little more teefury then woot. I'd buy either way though

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awesome!!! must own!

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How is this getting looked over? I love it! Those damned beach bullies!

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OH... guess the text would do it. That's a shame. This would make a damn nice shirt.