Derby #119: Flight

Diet Coke + Mentos = Rocket

We'll just go ahead and say that's not incidental text.

Rejected because: We'll just go ahead and say that's not incidental text.

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Starion


quality posts: 1 Private Messages Starion
Re: Diet Coke Mentos = Rocket


I like it! It's very clean.

However I think those pesky copyright issues are going to get in the way. Maybe change Coke to Cola and Mentos to...Mentoes? Menthos? Mint-O's? Something that isn't branded already. >_>

fleamarketadict


quality posts: 4 Private Messages fleamarketadict
Re: Diet Coke Mentos = Rocket


Yeah, copyrights, plus it doesn't fly with the cap on.

An opinion should be the result of thought, not a substitute for it.

DirkDDarring


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Re: Diet Coke Mentos = Rocket


Your kidding right? Don't people even read the rules on here or do the just think the owners of the copy rights will over look it cause they are being funny.

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EclecticMuse


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Re: Diet Coke Mentos = Rocket


My only quibble here (besides the copyright issue) is that it's obvious stock vectors and images were used, and that they weren't cut out properly. You can still see some of the white background in the Coke bottles and the flames.

Otherwise I agree with the poster who said you might want to change the brand names to avoid getting rejected, and consider getting rid of the texture on the Mentos package since you did the same on the bottles.

tjost


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Re: Diet Coke Mentos = Rocket


Also this isn't incidental text, it's kind of imperative to the design.

jamnajar


quality posts: 0 Private Messages jamnajar
Re: Diet Coke Mentos = Rocket


I like the idea! kind of fell apart in the execution though..

Jamnajar was here^^

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