Derby #135: Faster, Higher, Stronger
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Zombie Evolution

Zombie Evolution
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Kerry672


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Haha, this is hilarious.

rwdougla


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I'd really like to see a couple more stages, if possible. Perhaps hand out of the ground, then crawling, limping, running, shotgun blast to face, or something.

Love the concept and silhouette style!

graffd02


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is it just me or does the last one look a little... feminine, whilst running...

gabeshockey


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graffd02 wrote:is it just me or does the last one look a little... feminine, whilst running...


Thanks for the constructive criticism guys...

Graff: Maybe just a little, but I am sure zombies arent that coordinated... Hey, is the guy in the robot suit the guy from the Burger King commercial with tiny hands?

loveengrey


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Yeah this would be better with a few more stages. Just 3 stages makes this a hard shirt to grasp without looking at the title. Maybe add in some detail work, like a tombstone in the first stage, or a farmer with a shotgun in the last stage. Also, maybe more of a typical pose in the 3rd stage would be better. You zombie looks quite joyous haha. You have a really good idea here. Just needs a smidgen of work for it to be great

gabeshockey


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loveengrey wrote:Yeah this would be better with a few more stages. Just 3 stages makes this a hard shirt to grasp without looking at the title. Maybe add in some detail work, like a tombstone in the first stage, or a farmer with a shotgun in the last stage. Also, maybe more of a typical pose in the 3rd stage would be better. You zombie looks quite joyous haha. You have a really good idea here. Just needs a smidgen of work for it to be great


I do like the hand and tombstone ideas, I may add those in shortly. Im just worried about the shirt getting too crowded. Thanks for the advice!

jokun


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gabeshockey wrote:Thanks for the constructive criticism guys...

Graff: Maybe just a little, but I am sure zombies arent that coordinated... Hey, is the guy in the robot suit the guy from the Burger King commercial with tiny hands?


i think it's just his hand behind him. it's gettin a litte wristy. other than that, great stuff

gabeshockey


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jokun wrote:i think it's just his hand behind him. it's gettin a litte wristy. other than that, great stuff


Thanks guys, I actually took some advice and resubmitted it. I couldnt put too many things on there, but I did add the hand and change the wristy feel, haha!

sYs73m


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This is amazing. I'd love for this to get to print! GMV

Linkoln


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I recently finished World War Z, so maybe I'm just in the mood for zombies, but this shirt convinced me to make an account to show my support!

Awesome design

gabeshockey


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Linkoln wrote:I recently finished World War Z, so maybe I'm just in the mood for zombies, but this shirt convinced me to make an account to show my support!

Awesome design


Thanks so much everyone! I really appreciate all of the votes, compliments, and support!

DrAlex


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graffd02 wrote:is it just me or does the last one look a little... feminine, whilst running...


Definitely the limp wrists give it away ...

Actually, I really like the idea of this shirt. Well executed. Maybe the first should have been a hand coming out of the ground.

Still, gets my vote.

gabeshockey


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DrAlex wrote:Definitely the limp wrists give it away ...

Actually, I really like the idea of this shirt. Well executed. Maybe the first should have been a hand coming out of the ground.

Still, gets my vote.


Thanks, I actaully have a resub up on the site where I added the hand, and also edited the "wristy" hand, haha.

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