Derby #135: Faster, Higher, Stronger
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Someday!

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mjc613


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Please write to your Congressperson and Senators if you want a space program like the one you have drawn. The one going to Congress in the next month has lots of satellites, but very little in the way of human space flight.

This is a delightful drawing.

stardamsel


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mjc613 wrote:Please write to your Congressperson and Senators if you want a space program like the one you have drawn. The one going to Congress in the next month has lots of satellites, but very little in the way of human space flight.

This is a delightful drawing.


Thanks, mjc613; actually, I already did :->

swammi1203


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Like the idea of thought bubble to engine exhaust, but not so big on the color choice. Just seems to clash in my eyes.

CrescentDebris


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Nice idea and the layout is nice too. I think the main things that hurt it are the bold colors and the boxed out bottom. The drawings quite nice and I agree that the thought bubble into the smoke is very cool. When dealing with several hues (Blue shirt, Green and Red background) try to keep the saturation and intensity down a bit. By nature, these 3 colors clash with each other. So having them really bright and bold just screams at you. Red, in particular, should really be used sparingly. Just keep that in mind.

Each entry is a learning experience so keep at it!

swammi1203


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Would it be toned down if he darkened the background and faded both the green and the red?

sasham62


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I'd like to see a bit more separation between the real world and the fantasy, fwiw.

stardamsel


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sasham62 wrote:I'd like to see a bit more separation between the real world and the fantasy, fwiw.


I appreciate the feedback, folks :-) Thanks for comments and suggestions!

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