Derby #139: Madness
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In the odd light of frankenstein's lab v3

In the odd light of frankenstein's lab v3
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odysseyroc


quality posts: 33 Private Messages odysseyroc
Re: In the odd light of frankenstein's lab v3


I changed the art a little bit and changed the lighting.





tjost


quality posts: 25 Private Messages tjost
Re: In the odd light of frankenstein's lab v3


And voted. The highlights you reworked make the idea stand out more and there's less distraction in the background. Great Job.

bethlehemstarr


quality posts: 19 Private Messages bethlehemstarr
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Voted again.
I like both versions, but I do agree that this is a little easier to see what's going on.
Oh- and I do like the way the mad scientist is oddly proportioned. It just seems to suit the style of the drawing perfectly.

edit: I do miss the 'inside a mad scientist's lab' look that was so apparent in V1. Not a deal breaker by any means... I guess it had to be a trade-off.

odysseyroc


quality posts: 33 Private Messages odysseyroc
tjost wrote:And voted. The highlights you reworked make the idea stand out more and there's less distraction in the background. Great Job.


Thanks for the crit on the first one, it really did help.





paigeg


quality posts: 7 Private Messages paigeg
Re: In the odd light of frankenstein's lab v3


I have to admit this rework without the background 'noise' does make the subject pop more. It was some cool stuff, but actually did make things a bit busy. Great resub!

MadamAtom


quality posts: 7 Private Messages MadamAtom
Re: In the odd light of frankenstein's lab v3


GMV for this one too. We'll see if either flies.

LunaVance


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I love the colors you have chosen for this design. Well done.

Ezshrkman


quality posts: 1 Private Messages Ezshrkman
Re: In the odd light of frankenstein's lab v3


I loved the older one... and this one kicks the old ones butt! I love P-butter and chocolate 2! Awesome!
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jmmbell1987


quality posts: 78 Private Messages jmmbell1987
Re: In the odd light of frankenstein's lab v3


Definitely much better with less going on in the background. Nice work!

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