Derby #139: Madness
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The Belfry

The Belfry
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theWanker


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I like the idea of an insane chicken thinking it's a bat. The belfry was kind of an afterthought, but I had to put the bats somewhere....

hustler03


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It's soooo dark. This isn't going to print well. I would lighten it up.

Neener Neener

stingray69


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I'm not sure woot can print this as is. Looks kinda gradienty. I don't think the print would come out that well anyway because it is so dark. Cool concept, though, and I like the atmosphere. Even if you don't go for the funny the bats in the belfry idea works on its own. I think you can do even more with negative space here to frame the composition. And maybe a little less copy/paste.

theWanker


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stingray69 wrote:I'm not sure woot can print this as is. Looks kinda gradienty. I don't think the print would come out that well anyway because it is so dark. Cool concept, though, and I like the atmosphere. Even if you don't go for the funny the bats in the belfry idea works on its own. I think you can do even more with negative space here to frame the composition. And maybe a little less copy/paste.


Thanks for the feedback, Stingray and Hustler. Please let me know what you think of the revised version:
http://shirt.woot.com/Derby/Entry.aspx?id=40831

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