Derby #139: Madness
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nychtophobia

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paigeg


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I really love this design. It's simple and very evocative. I think my only quibble is that it's just a tad overly simple. It's flat, has no depth between the night (the shirt) and the girl. Some subtle shading in gray or even a deep purple around the 'opening' might give it some more depth. Hmmm. I'm not an expert. Maybe one of the others would chime in?

froehrl1


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paigeg wrote:I really love this design. It's simple and very evocative. I think my only quibble is that it's just a tad overly simple. It's flat, has no depth between the night (the shirt) and the girl. Some subtle shading in gray or even a deep purple around the 'opening' might give it some more depth. Hmmm. I'm not an expert. Maybe one of the others would chime in?


thank you. i'm not an artist. this is the first derby i've uploaded for. i'm always happy to receive some constructive criticism.

SnowQueenVT


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froehrl1 wrote:thank you. i'm not an artist. this is the first derby i've uploaded for. i'm always happy to receive some constructive criticism.


Hi froehrl1! This is really a very strong idea you have created for your first derby! I look at it and I feel sad and gray, this emotion is what you intended, and because it makes me feel this way I think you have many hidden depths!

This makes me think that you will bring other great ideas forward.
It is such a sad picture that it might make people depressed , which nobody wants to be, unless they DO want to be! In which case this would suit their mood perfectly! good idea, I am sure lots of people could not express the sadness you have here half as well.

http://www.wix.com/scottgreenip/snowqueenvt

severina1334


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I find this haunting, it reminds me of some asian horror films like Ring or Tale of Two Sisters.

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