Derby #149: Psychedelia
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Hush!

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Icemank91


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A collab between arparham and myself! A take on a "Flower Child". Comments and criticism welcome!

vrubinst


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is the misspelling intentional?

kinda a nifty design, although the message might be better conveyed on a darker shirt color

mjc613


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OOPS! just saw the typo previously mentioned.
If you fix that, this will definitely be vote-worthy. I love the monochromatic look combined with the splash of color at the end. And the hair reminds me of Al Hirshfeld drawings, where he hid his daughter's name all over the place.

DianaSprinkle


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Icemank91 wrote:A collab between arparham and myself! A take on a "Flower Child". Comments and criticism welcome!


I like the idea of this design and the strong red and white color choice. I almost don't think you need so many colors in the text at the bottom. Maybe a single strong golden brown or green or yellow. A color that would vibrate against that red might be nice.

I sort of wish there were more flowers to it. That part of the shirt gets a little lost. Maybe instead of swirly hair she could have hair made of flowers? They could be layered in a repeating pattern that still kind of looked like hair. =D

Also as vrubinst mentioned "Psychedelic" appears to be misspelled.

Over all it's rather striking. Good luck!

Icemank91


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Thanks guys! I'll try to get a resub up after work today!

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