Derby #159: Road Trip!
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The Open Road Behind You Ver2

The Open Road Behind You  Ver2
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zosai


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Re: The Open Road Behind You Ver2


RESUB!

Please vote again. Based on feedback, I removed the window frame and centered the mirror on the shirt.


6 colors on a black shirt, Pantone 122, 138, 1805, 490, 2915, and white.

here are some close-ups, at full-scale and half-scale, same as before:





and a link to a larger size:
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joshuajmasters


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Re: The Open Road Behind You Ver2


It was bold to make the change, but I do think this looks really good.

nrarmen


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I like this version better. Great job

KromeHWI


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Re: The Open Road Behind You Ver2



i think it was a good change. although i didnt mind the widow too much. it was a little strange but it added a lot of perspective to the drawing and made it less centered too...

anyway. still very nice!

jed1nerd


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Re: The Open Road Behind You Ver2


Beautiful design, but not something I'd wear on a shirt.

--JN

Fatstrat06


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This is muuuch better! A simple line deletion made this 10x more wearable. I love the coloring and design well done my friend.

camoor


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zosai


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camoor wrote:Love it, GMV


Thanks to everyone who has voted and re-voted for this design! I appreciate your compliments and comments on the both versions and I'm glad that I didn't lose your votes by resubbing.

I figure some people didn't have a problem with the old version, and obviously not everyone will like either version, but it was worth it to me to fix the composition.

Thanks!

camoor


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zosai wrote:Thanks to everyone who has voted and re-voted for this design! I appreciate your compliments and comments on the both versions and I'm glad that I didn't lose your votes by resubbing.

I figure some people didn't have a problem with the old version, and obviously not everyone will like either version, but it was worth it to me to fix the composition.

Thanks!


Yeah, I don't know why this didn't get more votes, it's very cool and very wearable. I always like these more stylistic entries. All I can think is that there are alot of 13 year-old girls on woot who vote alot, especially when designs like this don't win against the stuff at the top.

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