Derby #159: Road Trip!

Loading Up For One More Mystery!

Not enough parody

Rejected because: Not enough parody

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Jake1364


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Nicely done! The only thing I'd say that's not working out is the motion arc of 'the brown dog' throwing the trash out of the van. You either need to redraw it and make it more flowy/motiony or just take it out. Right now it's too static.

Jake1364


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maybe just removing it all together though would be best. give it a shot?

Siax


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Jake1364 wrote:maybe just removing it all together though would be best. give it a shot?


I agree....i mean at first I had no idea what it was until you said something.

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