Derby #165: The Scientific Method
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Evaporation Cycle

Evaporation Cycle
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roanin


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Here's a link to a bigger picture of the design

roanin


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Feedback is greatly appreciated.

mindputtee


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I like the concept and artwork, it's very cute. The composition is a little lacking though. There is a lot of steps in this flow chart which makes it a lot to see on a tshirt and follow. It also has a kind of large hole in the middle that might make it look a little odd on a shirt. It's got promise though! Keep at it! =)

roanin


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mindputtee wrote:I like the concept and artwork, it's very cute. The composition is a little lacking though. There is a lot of steps in this flow chart which makes it a lot to see on a tshirt and follow. It also has a kind of large hole in the middle that might make it look a little odd on a shirt. It's got promise though! Keep at it! =)


Thanks for the feedback. And thanks for voting/looking

Hammylink


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Way too busy and the "sun drop" is a bit confusing.

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soshad


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I think it's cute. Thanks for adding the link to the bigger picture so we could see all the little details better.

JesseBYAH


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I agree that the comp is a little busy but it is still really cute! I like it

roanin


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Hammylink wrote:Way too busy and the "sun drop" is a bit confusing.


Thank you for the feedback, and for voting

roanin


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soshad wrote:I think it's cute. Thanks for adding the link to the bigger picture so we could see all the little details better.


aww. thanks for looking/voting

roanin


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JesseBYAH wrote:I agree that the comp is a little busy but it is still really cute! I like it


Thanks for voting and for the feedback

deedlebee


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