Derby #165: The Scientific Method
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Observe. Test. Report.

Observe. Test. Report.
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midgerock


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Re: Observe. Test. Report.


so I heard many crits on other submissions that they weren't showing "The Scientific Method". So I came up with this. "The Scientific Method" used one night in a club.
Guy "observes" girl dancing. Guy "tests" his theory of "getting with girl" and finds his results. Guy goes and "reports" his "findings" to his friends. The "data" may have been altered as most guys do when reporting their exploits with their friends.

also I found a mistake on my shirt comp.
That's grass green for the shirt color.
Not kelly green.

Also please vote for my other submission, "Albert Funkenstein and The Scientific Method!".

Re: Albert Funkenstein and The Scientific Method!

It only costs one click and one vote.
Do it for the kids!

swammi1203


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A very commendable effort to stick to the theme. Unfortunately, I really can't get behind such a box design on a shirt.

Other than that I find the concept fantastic.

keelhaulkate


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i actually like the comic style of this. good job

midgerock


quality posts: 6 Private Messages midgerock
swammi1203 wrote:A very commendable effort to stick to the theme. Unfortunately, I really can't get behind such a box design on a shirt.

Other than that I find the concept fantastic.


keelhaulkate wrote:i actually like the comic style of this. good job


Thanks both of you.
This design was kind of last minute and needed to get the idea out there. I could have spent more time on the layout of the panels and possible shapes of them maybe to make the design for the shirt more dynamic but it still would have been a panel to panel story. I also think the design would be stronger with words "The Scientific Method" beneath and the numbers 1-3 in each panel with the label of "observe" "Test" and "report". also I wonder if it would look better on black or a darker color. I don't know. Thats my own crit on my own work.
Any other thoughts?

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