Derby #169: Phobias

Phear of Fobias

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Rejected because: too much text

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ronzalone


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Re: Phear of Fobias


I'm not sure this text could really be considered incidental...

jguss1


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ronzalone wrote:I'm not sure this text could really be considered incidental...


Well I see it as that the text isn't really "text" but they are characters really. Thanks for the input though.

kbloomq1


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jguss1 wrote:Well I see it as that the text isn't really "text" but they are characters really. Thanks for the input though.


I don't think that's how it works. If you removed the letters and replaced them with, say, geometric shapes with faces, would this design still mean the same thing? No, in this case it wouldn't because what your "characters" look like (which is letters) is completely vital to the meaning of the illustration.

Also, what color is this supposed to be? To me it looks like silver, which is not a shirt color that Woot offers.

sTyLeS


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kbloomq1 wrote:I don't think that's how it works. If you removed the letters and replaced them with, say, geometric shapes with faces, would this design still mean the same thing? No, in this case it wouldn't because what your "characters" look like (which is letters) is completely vital to the meaning of the illustration.

Also, what color is this supposed to be? To me it looks like silver, which is not a shirt color that Woot offers.


If you're intending it to be heather gray, you'll have to resub on the heather template. Woot is pretty strict about that and will reject it otherwise.

jguss1


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sTyLeS wrote:If you're intending it to be heather gray, you'll have to resub on the heather template. Woot is pretty strict about that and will reject it otherwise.


thanks for the advice man

orangefrze


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Re: Phear of Fobias


What is the red tongue thing in the "O"?

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