Derby #169: Phobias
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The Abyss

The Abyss
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artsyn


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Endless ocean and endless space scare the crap out of me.

ronzalone


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I like the design, but I feel it should either be bigger on the shirt or utilize more of the space on it.

artsyn


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ronzalone wrote:I like the design, but I feel it should either be bigger on the shirt or utilize more of the space on it.


Thanks!
I thought I was limited to a certain size based on something it said on the upload page, but looking at other people's submissions, that doesn't seem to be the case. This is my first crack at this. Live and learn I guess.

skippykj


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It could also work with placement more to a side and/or the divers farther down. I really like the drawing

trixydan


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I think you should resub. This is really good, but the scale is killing it. Use more of the shirt. I'd like to see more of the 'space' and 'ocean', even if you don't make the figures bigger

Siax


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trixydan wrote:I think you should resub. This is really good, but the scale is killing it. Use more of the shirt. I'd like to see more of the 'space' and 'ocean', even if you don't make the figures bigger


ditto plus it could work as a side placement

raealise


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ronzalone wrote:I like the design, but I feel it should either be bigger on the shirt or utilize more of the space on it.


Actually, i like the design small, goes well with the fear of large open space. i would just move it off center a bit. otherwise, i think its great ^^ just my opinion though, good luck!

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