Derby #170: Fall Colors
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When I grow up

When I grow up
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jasneko


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Re: When I grow up

A little late, but this idea came to me and I felt inspired to do it.

One day, little acorn, one day!

midgerock


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super cute late submission.
really like it.

jasneko


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midgerock wrote:super cute late submission.
really like it.
Thanks very much Midgerock!


frik


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the bug shoould have been a squirrel whose thought bubble showed him with a full tummy in teh middle of winter

No. Yes.

blanked


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Sooo is he telling that to the bug whose descendants will feed off off him?

fishbiscuit5


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This is really cute, Jas. I like the way you drew the tree.



kevlar51


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Nice work jasneko; I like this a lot!

radharose


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It's cute, but I think the message isn't clear if you don't read the title first. I think it might have been easier to read if the acorn was talking about becoming a tree to a caterpillar, who had a speech bubble with a butterfly. Or something like that anyway, so that it would be a little more obvious.

jasneko


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Re: When I grow up

Wow, thanks so much everyone! So nice to see the surge of votes on such a late entry!
I actually really like frik's idea (thanks!) though... I was trying to think of how to incorporate a squirrel. I'm thinking of submitting a version along the lines of this... any thoughts?


Assassin15


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jasneko wrote:Wow, thanks so much everyone! So nice to see the surge of votes on such a late entry!
I actually really like frik's idea (thanks!) though... I was trying to think of how to incorporate a squirrel. I'm thinking of submitting a version along the lines of this... any thoughts?


I would suggest making the ears much smaller... I thought it was a bunny, until I saw the long tail :P

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jasneko


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Re: When I grow up

Based on the feedback above, I made another version

Re: When I Grow Up V.2

lonelypond


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Well, I think the placement on v. 2 works better (+ the stewing thought bubble cute), but this is the one I'd probably wear

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