Derby #182: Fire

Goldfish On Fire

Thumnail and comp don't match, pick one shirt color and resubmit

Rejected because: Thumnail and comp don't match, pick one shirt color and resubmit

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darel


quality posts: 1 Private Messages darel

Great composition and colours!

jchuguelet


quality posts: 0 Private Messages jchuguelet
Re: Goldfish On Fire


I really like this design, especially the non-literal use of coloring and curved lines in the goldfish to represent fire. The spilled-water provides a nice color and elemental contrast as well.

AdderXYU


quality posts: 38 Private Messages AdderXYU
Re: Goldfish On Fire


This is nice and all, but I'd be totally unsurprised if the fire was too abstract to not get rejected.

uniique


quality posts: 2 Private Messages uniique
Re: Goldfish On Fire


splashy goodness. their lungs must be burning
the flipping goldfish as flame works for me+1!

kinzoku


quality posts: 17 Private Messages kinzoku
Re: Goldfish On Fire


Lovely work. I like the style going on here.

In the future, try to keep background color consistency. The preview image shows a much too dark yellow background, and you have a white background with the fish under the shirt preview. Everything should have the same lemon-yellow background.

JRWorkshop


quality posts: 0 Private Messages JRWorkshop

Great vector work!


spratman


quality posts: 1 Private Messages spratman
Re: Goldfish On Fire


Really very cool, but I wouldn't be surprised to see it rejected on Monday for being off-topic or because the comp and thumbnail don't match. But you never know the rejectionator is capricious.

morleyt2009


quality posts: 2 Private Messages morleyt2009
Re: Goldfish On Fire


Too bad it's been rejected. So lovely. I would like to see it pop up again in a derby that fits.

jboshaw


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Re: Goldfish On Fire


i'd really like for this to be resubmitted. fix the comp. it was in the fog when i voted for it so maybe it could make it again. it's only saturday! one of the few shirts i'd actually buy.

ncheremnykh


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jboshaw wrote:i'd really like for this to be resubmitted. fix the comp. it was in the fog when i voted for it so maybe it could make it again. it's only saturday! one of the few shirts i'd actually buy.


I really appreciate the support and suggestions. I have resubmitted the design with a matching comp. and template background colors and will be more aware of this in future postings.

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