Derby #182: Fire
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Heart Burn v.2

Heart Burn v.2
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fishbiscuit5


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Re: Heart Burn v.2


Figured I would try a smaller design with the placement over the heart, no halftones, and less swirly thingies. 5 colors on heather grey.

I'd love some feedback. Thanks!











midgerock


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not sure about the color pallette. I like the concept of heartburn and having a heart on fire but this reminds me too much of a puffy paint design or embroidery. I am not trying to be mean but I wonder if you reworked the design more towards a literal heart on fire and remove the swirlies and bobbles, something akin to the House of blues or similar design.... just some thoughts and feedback.

fishbiscuit5


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midgerock wrote:not sure about the color pallette. I like the concept of heartburn and having a heart on fire but this reminds me too much of a puffy paint design or embroidery. I am not trying to be mean but I wonder if you reworked the design more towards a literal heart on fire and remove the swirlies and bobbles, something akin to the House of blues or similar design.... just some thoughts and feedback.


I don't think you're being mean at all. I appreciate the honest feedback. I was trying to make something more girlie with this one. I will play with it again and use your suggestions. Thanks, midgerock!











blanked


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Re: Heart Burn v.2


It is a bit girlie for my tastes, but I like the largeness of the first better, something about the full shirt design was appealing, tho normally I go for side placements. I think the blue went better too, but that may just be cause I know what the color is in real life.

fishbiscuit5


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blanked wrote:It is a bit girlie for my tastes, but I like the largeness of the first better, something about the full shirt design was appealing, tho normally I go for side placements. I think the blue went better too, but that may just be cause I know what the color is in real life.


I appreciate the feedback. I was just trying something different and learning what may or may not work in future designs. Full shirt designs don't generally appeal to me. I like smaller prints, but good to know that the first version of this may have been the better one. Thanks for the support!











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