Derby #185: Things That Start with the Letter T
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Toast! (v2 - super edit)

Toast! (v2 - super edit)
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Spiritgreen


quality posts: 217 Private Messages Spiritgreen
Re: Toast! (v2 - super edit)


Watch as Spiritgreen learns to edit (and talk in the third person, but please ignore that part).


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Thanks for looking! Please vote if you like kittens. I mean, this design. ^_^

---Spiritgreen

noblehappenstance


quality posts: 0 Private Messages noblehappenstance
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I liked the first version, but I think the simple one is better! Good work


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jasneko


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Re: Toast! (v2 - super edit)

While the other version was great and the background well done, I think this simplified composition is more wearable (although I prefer the royal blue color - it looked yummier and more super-hero-like) Cute and inventive!

Vote!

bassanimation


quality posts: 98 Private Messages bassanimation
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Sweeet! I liked the first version just fine, but I also like this one! I don't mind more complex tees with scenery, but a wise Woot sage once told me to keep it simple. Very cool! +1 again!

PixelPants


quality posts: 68 Private Messages PixelPants
Re: Toast! (v2 - super edit)


Put it on any color and I'd probably vote Spiritgreen. The character is a winner. We need more heros like Toast. You should warn people of imitation shirts that might spring up with people sticking any old piece of toast on a shirt.

JRWorkshop


quality posts: 0 Private Messages JRWorkshop

It looks better Spirit. In this case simple is better


DrPepperSpray


quality posts: 0 Private Messages DrPepperSpray
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I think the first one is better. This one seems like it lost something.

Spiritgreen


quality posts: 217 Private Messages Spiritgreen
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Wow, I didn't expect this kind of support on the resub. Thank you!

(The original, more colorful, more complicated version is still up in case you like it better.)

CVBrennan


quality posts: 0 Private Messages CVBrennan
Re: Toast! (v2 - super edit)


The thing I miss most from the original was the shock and awe of the on looking common bread... because obviously this super toast is beyond the norm. I also miss the sense of depth given by the city backdrop. The new grey is nice but i liked the blue with the white city... so i'm pretty torn between the two. Nice art.

charleswallace12


quality posts: 0 Private Messages charleswallace12
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I think this version is much less confusing than the previous(Although, I saw this one first), I wish I could vote

"Imagination is more important than Knowledge" -Albert Einstein

7anya


quality posts: 1 Private Messages 7anya
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Oh!!! I love this! I want to buy it!! Come oon! Toast is my nickname, it would be a perfect shirt. And super adorable.

Spiritgreen


quality posts: 217 Private Messages Spiritgreen
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Thanks. ^_____^

specsmachine


quality posts: 31 Private Messages specsmachine

Twharting evildoers with his deadly butter-beam!

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