Derby #193: Catchy Slogans for Everyday Products
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I wouldn't touch these...

I wouldn't touch these...
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CrystaIEyes


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I almost added some green droplets to the shirt comp ;D

Enjoy!

Feedback is always welcome, this might as well be my first derby =X.

sTyLeS


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CrystaIEyes wrote:I almost added some green droplets to the shirt comp ;D

Enjoy!

Feedback is always welcome, this might as well be my first derby =X.


Why do you say that? What was wrong with your other two submissions?

CrystaIEyes


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sTyLeS wrote:Why do you say that? What was wrong with your other two submissions?


They were I think almost a year ago, if not more? (I'm not sure!)
Ironically I had to think about it when you said I had two, I forgot my second one entirely!

But yeah, it's just been a long while since I tried a derby, and that I forgot anything/everything so felt like my first time all over again!

Geethatsgr8


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I love this shirt (and would definitely need one for my 4 year old son). I just wish it said "When you're out of sleeves". The "to use" part isn't necessary. It sounds weird, and like you're having to explain the joke. But the shirt is a great idea!

Psychlist1972


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I would totally get this for my two kids.

blinddog3d


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I like where you started. If it were me, I would'vr gone "I only need Tissues, Cause this shirt has short sleeves."

Or something like that. This is very cute and I've already been proven off-base on my prejudgment of another entry's design content(sockerface).

But I must commend your execution. Just wonderful. I give you a vote on cleanliness.
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brUno

blinddog3d


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blinddog3d wrote:......But I must commend your execution. Just wonderful. I give you a vote on cleanliness.
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brUno


I just notice that you used 6 colors to make a duochromatic. Shades in the same family. This is a 3 color print and it seems you made a production headache. You may want to look at that in the future derby battles.

Take a tute on seps in shades. It also depends what Adobe program you used (I'm assumiong Adobe?). I'm vvery new but I have friends that are forkin ba'kickin' in Adobe. I buy them beers and let them show off. I always learn something.

I'm gonna win one of these soon, so if you spot anything on mine, let me know. We'll keep it str8!

brUno

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